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Chapter one UwU
Maddy
May 22, 2020
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Maddy - k, and also the girl is based on an actual girl in my school who changed for a boy so lillia is gonna change later on. I liked the girl and we ended up dating for 2 years.
1 day agoreply

hanshy - Okay so besides the typos and grammatical errors, you need to space out the dialogue. So whenever a new person is talking start a new paragraph. The thing that I liked about this paragraph was that it was very relatable. Although I don't have an older sister, there's always that one super slutty girl that thinks she's so damn cool. Lol. Fix those grammatical and spelling errors and you'll be good to go. Be sure to hit my story up. https://www.penana.com/story/61961/falling-ongoing/toc
2 days agoreply

Maddy - OMG SO MANY FRICKEN TYPOS Im so so so sorry about that. Please don't hate on meh.
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