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I'm a traveler of stories and I want to improve my craft so I can do justice to anything I write. Would appreciate constructive criticism and maybe a friend or two. My Website: https://blankmarkswriter.wordpress.com/ Games I've worked on and made: https://blankmarks.itch.io/ Support Me and Take The Storyteller's Oath: https://wondrous-writer-3859.ck.page/storytelleroath
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A Traveler's Mind labyrinth-Poetry

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Table of Contents Intro Comments (4) Top sponsors

“Obsidian Rain Drops”

“Rainbow Static”

"Drowning in the Waves"

"Now You Can Grow Up"

One More Bloody Step

"Crying With No Eyes"

Just some poetry I've written in the past, present, and future. Sorry if it comes off as edgy or overly dramatic, I picked the better ones.

I would love some feedback on these, so I can improve this side of my writing so it doesn't come off as bad.

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“Obsidian Rain Drops”

“Rainbow Static”

"Drowning in the Waves"

"Now You Can Grow Up"

One More Bloody Step

"Crying With No Eyes"

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