
【去北極救公主】474Please respect copyright.PENANAZ8nUcomRHd
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殘忍奧丁挑戰兩人的堅定474Please respect copyright.PENANAjNrBV4Jkdc
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與你駕乘迴遊世界的流星474Please respect copyright.PENANASCYhxQozNb
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最近大家都沒法去旅行,想必心情會很鬱悶。這次不出那些諷刺社會的主題,就出一篇富有喜劇色彩的詩,讓大家能繼續以積極心情熬過疫情和各種社會問題吧。474Please respect copyright.PENANA5dlE3wP7Br
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這首詩是我幾年前去挪威找女朋友時,在飛機上想出來的,經修改後變得更格律。內文說得我像有什麼神功一樣,其實「白鷹」只是借喻飛機,其他都是天馬行空的想像而已。474Please respect copyright.PENANAtsS6yb1wzu
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格律方面,我試用了474Please respect copyright.PENANAPJqYh82D2j
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的句內押韻的方式,而B用了入聲,看看能不能做出某種音樂旋律般的節奏。用PTH讀的話,應該也是押韻的,不過就會失去入聲的節奏。