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試著形容一種無法用文字去形容的痛 (修訂例子和描述)
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試著形容一種無法用文字去形容的,淚乾苦酸傷澀屈怨,漫長而無法解脫,被迫活下來面對卻是連呼吸都感到劇痛的抽心絕鬱


靜,難尋。時光遠去,亦無力挽。


明白下列一堆形容詞/例子/比喻是說甚麼,
而又能勾劃出那份心境的高手者,
一注獨得獎賞。


請描述出一些,
您認為是最懊悔屈苦無發形容的無力澀傷感,近
乎是非筆默所能形容。


形容詞例子:

煩惱如文字般,像路軌續航至無邊天際的盡處,
沿路被車輪輾壓著的生命一般,
承受著,真空、無力、飄浮、嚴寒極凍、絕對的孤獨裡,
在滿佈隕石的星河中,被撞擊熔燃,
承受著不止息的痛,
再邁向無盡的漆黑中,
不斷地被分解撕裂,
成了無窮盡的碎片,
份子被歹解後,
永遠地,被高壓研磨,被高溫吞噬著
原是快樂純一,不滅的,靈魂。


故事般例子 :

貧苦人家老來生子,卻是傻子/呆子/逆子/殘疾,
或是被人拐去而割去內臟售賣只找回屍體/被切手腳行乞後找回來卻已精神錯亂/幼年餵養中親手哽死了兒。


又如丈夫爛賭,賣房賣兒女賣妻,妻心碎慾裂中,丈夫回轉,卻原來又再變回去,比之前更甚

或是逆子爛賭,賣掉祖宗18袋家房

或是一種明明是很艱辛到捱到/等到/得到的事或物或人,但當中因一點小事/惡事,而得了一種更大反差的悲傷結局。

用最短的一些比喻,
中了六合彩,但彩卷掉了/被搶了/燒了之類。
但這些都是一瞬間的苦澀酸傷而已。

若是如,九代單傳,家道中落,兒終發憤成才,晚年成婚,卻不是對方竟是愚人,令家中變得苦不堪言,親人散盡,家醜四傳,也竟無法傳宗接代等等等,反差比的傷痛。


不懂的,年輕的,能看破的,都是快樂的。




試著形容一種無法用文字去形容的,淚乾苦酸傷澀屈怨,漫長而無法解脫,被迫活下來面對卻是連呼吸都感到劇痛的抽心絕鬱


靜,難尋。時光遠去,亦無力挽。


明白下列一堆形容詞/例子/比喻是說甚麼,
而又能勾劃出那份心境的高手者,
一注獨得獎賞。


請描述出一些,
您認為是最懊悔屈苦無發形容的無力澀傷感,近
乎是非筆默所能形容。


形容詞例子:

煩惱如文字般,像路軌續航至無邊天際的盡處,
沿路被車輪輾壓著的生命一般,
承受著,真空、無力、飄浮、嚴寒極凍、絕對的孤獨裡,
在滿佈隕石的星河中,被撞擊熔燃,
承受著不止息的痛,
再邁向無盡的漆黑中,
不斷地被分解撕裂,
成了無窮盡的碎片,
份子被歹解後,
永遠地,被高壓研磨,被高溫吞噬著
原是快樂純一,不滅的,靈魂。


故事般例子 :

貧苦人家老來生子,卻是傻子/呆子/逆子/殘疾,
或是被人拐去而割去內臟售賣只找回屍體/被切手腳行乞後找回來卻已精神錯亂/幼年餵養中親手哽死了兒。


又如丈夫爛賭,賣房賣兒女賣妻,妻心碎慾裂中,丈夫回轉,卻原來又再變回去,比之前更甚

或是逆子爛賭,賣掉祖宗18袋家房

或是一種明明是很艱辛到捱到/等到/得到的事或物或人,但當中因一點小事/惡事,而得了一種更大反差的悲傷結局。

用最短的一些比喻,
中了六合彩,但彩卷掉了/被搶了/燒了之類。
但這些都是一瞬間的苦澀酸傷而已。

若是如,九代單傳,家道中落,兒終發憤成才,晚年成婚,卻不是對方竟是愚人,令家中變得苦不堪言,親人散盡,家醜四傳,也竟無法傳宗接代等等等,反差比的傷痛。


不懂的,年輕的,能看破的,都是快樂的。




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