作者妳好753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTSgZeXXmdf
受到妳的邀请753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIzNdbPku6e
稍微看了下这本佩姬753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPIj1olcgnT
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhhtpkfwvZx
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiXpHrmTNB7
现世一堆东西753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7quk2a8YI5
其实就很简单一个道理753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzGJDuR905D
主角想要被爱753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ69VCw9KWTX
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡflPhfhr3vT
男主卢克爱753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwWdgZ25iDp
主角就爱回去753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOEW2IWZF7c
女主伊莎爱753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡykacMIjRLN
主角就爱回去753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3LD6F0IbKC
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQC7041x5FI
想要被爱是佩姬的主题753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJw3onD68EY
主角性别不是问题753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4ToBTzocJv
内心冲突不是问题753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsiC0xwplZ3
主角被爱就迎刃而解753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ16pA8dj3Zk
看不懂这点整部书就看不了753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡt81w0wbZ90
妳的书乏人问津是这道理753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdMGYlm8ROo
作者妳说主角口是心非753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0UYvg1NfgT
欸我说这不对753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpQnKh1Sl0J
这明摆着口非心也非753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZFOaL6WbNf
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJz9LX6foIv
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHRyKDLwjgY
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡplrb7CWLkr
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPP1DeZiNqd
为了被爱753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡW0WFUHHM1A
连原本的性别都不要了753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhIW5viztRk
这主角疯的傻的753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiNyPrpDrRk
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQ3raYA50im
女主伊莎753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡM9a2gqd1mK
单纯的色鬼753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbNtWjmQ9qv
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡClMqLu71sL
黑化可能
艾德兰753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpCFVx7hk1q
可怜虫阿753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhinMpSBS9q
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAWXhuydgGa
妳说解释不够753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHxN7yvLRlR
我到觉得清楚753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzo9KeP6FN3
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡK6RrgQQixN
他为啥强753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiuZ6xmsDQv
妳啥都没讲753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡI4KDHPPlgr
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCFe0pktEuD
也是除主角外最明白的角色753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCTUy8nVo2C
她就拿来爱主角的753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjhwTBdjWT8
功能性角色
还有其他许多753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKsERPyDgog
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGBQRGRZKok
可以瞧见妳的苦心753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLmon6xXOCd
我觉得这没必要753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡH6ZsH9Zp3o
好的台词提一次够了753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡppBel5Jhuo
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyWAWUXrRb7
我倒嫌设定囉嗦753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQ1vfbcnmHB
空白很重要753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2IrE7Ovx00
没明白有没明白的好处753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvlUnKb55j0
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvPhHdMdNvv
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcfIQqOumVO
我还会继续看的753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡygHZKOxxcn
确实好看753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRgvwf6Ppv0
希望你这能写完753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeYwa6VDxoX
能放上起点不753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSy6mtzocYv
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQ8sS6WghHE
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWE5IxXP0AP
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡR4KXFF7ah8
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡStfU9a7RcJ
感謝你的評文753Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6UuRbY8lGf
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