作者妳好807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGMfcjQ9QVK
受到妳的邀请807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdoQhMEoQuP
稍微看了下这本佩姬807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzmNLp8Sn8U
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡChuwxus3qs
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡILqNRsRO28
现世一堆东西807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbRs42XPYor
其实就很简单一个道理807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPDyRZUWDyx
主角想要被爱807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZ7etETQE1S
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6yZITsoCSJ
男主卢克爱807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSgOqHfCb8v
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女主伊莎爱807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡchJCWpsEO6
主角就爱回去807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDY5G9mygjs
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxBD8K7Snh3
想要被爱是佩姬的主题807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡysL7JBTh3F
主角性别不是问题807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgObmAg8DnO
内心冲突不是问题807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwnwHtbXbIz
主角被爱就迎刃而解807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGUQgJ0DtTC
看不懂这点整部书就看不了807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZLYZZvrB7Q
妳的书乏人问津是这道理807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAXNzKwYEED
作者妳说主角口是心非807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgrWTBpPhFO
欸我说这不对807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsK7z3XFN2N
这明摆着口非心也非807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQkuQhJOJTu
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuLaerhqTwL
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOJh8Mv3XbR
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGsSlEoB9fH
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5R6h4EY5pQ
为了被爱807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡD7zCdvoL8w
连原本的性别都不要了807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrshroGvh9l
这主角疯的傻的807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFiktjuR61i
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡt46NLQ5Lre
女主伊莎807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOYtPIjPAYK
单纯的色鬼807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPtr18OT6h7
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQt96gAfdx5
黑化可能
艾德兰807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7H7z4uh6LV
可怜虫阿807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyvzqAL0UkL
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1X6e3eloUf
妳说解释不够807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0B2heAwrpu
我到觉得清楚807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4Gmi9qFzf0
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzbLoJiZHzJ
他为啥强807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡepR0amP8Nj
妳啥都没讲807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡN0azdKP7JJ
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCytv9ooHmk
也是除主角外最明白的角色807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAQ0ZE9rF74
她就拿来爱主角的807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrtjTafQzRb
功能性角色
还有其他许多807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡw47i60W1od
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNBhkBPAFjR
可以瞧见妳的苦心807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9Y3fRDLxid
我觉得这没必要807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYAj1bqxcNp
好的台词提一次够了807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiUOXGYD97q
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡu8oxSYOeLk
我倒嫌设定囉嗦807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFdXzH1Lnyn
空白很重要807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ51igGfq3zf
没明白有没明白的好处807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHm2k81lqfY
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCIY4NFKlqK
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcLP1qQrLrX
我还会继续看的807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoVlLvCAbHW
确实好看807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡH4qy3JaoQF
希望你这能写完807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaxVxW8a8WZ
能放上起点不807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlSUfANxUJD
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5uuER1r9vJ
作者回應：807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhxxYw7zf06
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYxLZjSGpB3
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXdIJdqiZWa
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5KNdp9sjzX
感謝你的評文807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡR8ldkmDtxj
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