作者妳好828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4teGBpXgsG
受到妳的邀请828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8gzU00jQUu
稍微看了下这本佩姬828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡth87DG1cYu
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCDNemLsDQI
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZZpsrJoUvm
现世一堆东西828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRiVyyVpQBE
其实就很简单一个道理828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3Lbs6SAg8x
主角想要被爱828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡq09ssXGJOy
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAI9xwa1C3X
男主卢克爱828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtUIAASgMMI
主角就爱回去828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUc2ZyWA5IX
女主伊莎爱828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbqf0M1ifRL
主角就爱回去828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlv4SQbdx4H
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWBZldAWYPf
想要被爱是佩姬的主题828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjlH4HvF9uI
主角性别不是问题828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2ZCXIGvxEB
内心冲突不是问题828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQ9mbZjh8wq
主角被爱就迎刃而解828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBrER7gsYFr
看不懂这点整部书就看不了828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVnjRAgni6H
妳的书乏人问津是这道理828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6qG3o78Bkq
作者妳说主角口是心非828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ44S1gXqPpm
欸我说这不对828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2YgcuE9NNZ
这明摆着口非心也非828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAeeGZTX4ga
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpPDJ9nN7AK
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJuA6akoLZw
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡijA5oSgjcf
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMOGFN7Svu8
为了被爱828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ19Xy5XE3wm
连原本的性别都不要了828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjVjeLDAtib
这主角疯的傻的828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtY2Gol0cbd
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNyA0Ct5Vx0
女主伊莎828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGMYG8fXIsu
单纯的色鬼828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDWKCsPLNwj
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwvHLCL2zIq
黑化可能
艾德兰828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxFr525jkIP
可怜虫阿828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxRX86UVonW
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJbUvJ4TfVU
妳说解释不够828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYkHiQBXLAu
我到觉得清楚828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2utwXmqmQA
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡboghKoNJwM
他为啥强828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3jLGCz1S67
妳啥都没讲828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ18xTzO8OFB
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmE59iRIzBx
也是除主角外最明白的角色828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡR7DwEXvwYa
她就拿来爱主角的828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdSGTQDL2iW
功能性角色
还有其他许多828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmXQHGpDqYi
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡH7lLBbkBIY
可以瞧见妳的苦心828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqXnUJ5Fpgw
我觉得这没必要828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡm9zUhkxEwj
好的台词提一次够了828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVQFmuKsRKz
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9TRRXkrx1w
我倒嫌设定囉嗦828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVkqxOaLwKO
空白很重要828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmWGlUW9N3y
没明白有没明白的好处828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmAo4uayOpA
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAH7ken6dW1
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdafew3Pqrv
我还会继续看的828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWzv87eRpGg
确实好看828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhz3OpZXYa1
希望你这能写完828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡp34gFLqP2R
能放上起点不828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgsqF5z13kf
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzH9NVGUNv9
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQIxQ2Ymljt
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBxfkFYrFOG
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQfDaIy3CQ3
感謝你的評文828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBduJ7MdDn7
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