作者妳好774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGJnnj45GpR
受到妳的邀请774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZrRzKwgR5S
稍微看了下这本佩姬774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHPMAHrNJoH
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVm0MFyAwsi
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfcVLVscgDq
现世一堆东西774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡu0vypKyCdA
其实就很简单一个道理774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzl1uwvbJy7
主角想要被爱774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3xVMIk7CsF
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡh94wR6y2kQ
男主卢克爱774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHIYPpSiLOP
主角就爱回去774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUVr7LMNxC4
女主伊莎爱774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtOWHWs7kPt
主角就爱回去774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ140ICtmbMq
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNiVCl7APRh
想要被爱是佩姬的主题774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyoYIAdQip7
主角性别不是问题774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWgT2JqSeJj
内心冲突不是问题774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5Rvf9ka1QE
主角被爱就迎刃而解774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdVUu2sHOqD
看不懂这点整部书就看不了774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHDaO2EOPtg
妳的书乏人问津是这道理774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7AqSDI51b4
作者妳说主角口是心非774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMmJsyc2InO
欸我说这不对774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0msM9M30OW
这明摆着口非心也非774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYtJPNlOIKe
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQXtwW45Uzk
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTjeV3IY6Av
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0tJhVNi1EI
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoGlGq6v8A8
为了被爱774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNqvAAnpyky
连原本的性别都不要了774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5GTDMqkdqk
这主角疯的傻的774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2xDVYlCwM8
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtvhqEjXrkg
女主伊莎774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfDuO7EILEb
单纯的色鬼774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLmjh7gkSRk
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbwKfluoATx
黑化可能
艾德兰774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQSwhyTUOgu
可怜虫阿774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqFrZr51Jk4
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNSmjCInNH0
妳说解释不够774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡq0gVcf6JcL
我到觉得清楚774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyZWduoNcJD
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMTNfq3GQxB
他为啥强774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMgEgPMLHS1
妳啥都没讲774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRQo7rNL0dC
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡs52szPpZvH
也是除主角外最明白的角色774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZGFD2AotTB
她就拿来爱主角的774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWTHfyNHpfp
功能性角色
还有其他许多774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwlxVchmZBp
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZgDShHjdoW
可以瞧见妳的苦心774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1q6RisLh9G
我觉得这没必要774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdTM3ifl1Uc
好的台词提一次够了774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡisbrjvNrYM
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTRJLkUKodK
我倒嫌设定囉嗦774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxcZQ5erhFf
空白很重要774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8xh0np8K5o
没明白有没明白的好处774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1CPLZhgInJ
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxHZjCjAZuu
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzOrjBRoaUk
我还会继续看的774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJpURhtLclA
确实好看774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡardrii1KHS
希望你这能写完774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5aVdasZxFW
能放上起点不774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrok1pbvHb6
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxRCuIV2uAJ
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhy5NYvUihw
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTiu0oZj4A6
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIs9pR0YglY
感謝你的評文774Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzoPPiDig5i
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