作者妳好771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNFXeVY0UGI
受到妳的邀请771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCDIu5JoWwQ
稍微看了下这本佩姬771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkEStZONOB1
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXMKZdmlsbC
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqzQaQsAOII
现世一堆东西771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkfzDkzlW8h
其实就很简单一个道理771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOdnCKOKtpo
主角想要被爱771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsNDzO6RAXS
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYwZiCVKHNj
男主卢克爱771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrij3lnlzPc
主角就爱回去771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9Vi4x66w0y
女主伊莎爱771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzeOK9wCyF0
主角就爱回去771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2M1bCNFfj4
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjjNr8Rmu5V
想要被爱是佩姬的主题771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoLzikCysar
主角性别不是问题771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnqkjiHDFY8
内心冲突不是问题771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsDe0ySybVj
主角被爱就迎刃而解771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlwpL7OyA1C
看不懂这点整部书就看不了771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaPR76ZSMPQ
妳的书乏人问津是这道理771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZOSI8aVqIx
作者妳说主角口是心非771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkOjOqgQtmz
欸我说这不对771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0ojV9Lpuyc
这明摆着口非心也非771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡU3hqweuVQ0
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPCMRcMqlo6
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡG8OtdzXXu1
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNr51T82TZg
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYHKnSW9i5Y
为了被爱771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡecpM880JZ0
连原本的性别都不要了771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBXfYxLaz84
这主角疯的傻的771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxnRBh2HWz8
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVa02RfIIpt
女主伊莎771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSvJ61CnvtK
单纯的色鬼771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡe6E2oI4R3F
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡduLi80IClz
黑化可能
艾德兰771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡISasIYDiDS
可怜虫阿771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGTEMKI5A0U
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJn3yTIQu7g
妳说解释不够771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7HeXj29hpl
我到觉得清楚771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeCNDkZcBvG
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXBtgxExtpz
他为啥强771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKWiE2cl5NC
妳啥都没讲771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡF5TMWAgkWz
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGM0h1gLZFD
也是除主角外最明白的角色771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQuNoF1S6jB
她就拿来爱主角的771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFDP2P3mEUF
功能性角色
还有其他许多771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdasd5v5Trs
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5wrajI8RZV
可以瞧见妳的苦心771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRd7Zk8V9jd
我觉得这没必要771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpNFfI44Vna
好的台词提一次够了771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1THGWVuWz5
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYS7E641BCr
我倒嫌设定囉嗦771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWRWJnSrrIg
空白很重要771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ06OV0kJodf
没明白有没明白的好处771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ23MjG7ih4q
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtMogseyhUf
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyBrQWMoXdz
我还会继续看的771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgwmJQ83bae
确实好看771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkwOXubuY7e
希望你这能写完771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡL2tD9jDAPS
能放上起点不771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡK7pI6XeaZd
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3OU53FFSHy
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRKJpUk0aaf
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡP6f0lsCvxS
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5tlstisWow
感謝你的評文771Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9JoaOIHFqr
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