作者妳好827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOk9FjviOQs
受到妳的邀请827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡU54jq9kYjx
稍微看了下这本佩姬827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡF57sXwX56h
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡydqY5VEa6l
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUzWQAMEdrT
现世一堆东西827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdsbFlsuNAz
其实就很简单一个道理827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuosavgS6Pg
主角想要被爱827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoCZJvUlnOH
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡV1kTwr73Gw
男主卢克爱827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDxO75eLaLy
主角就爱回去827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgIUZ8M5p42
女主伊莎爱827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWXAZyRj4Kb
主角就爱回去827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRx3lvmSCh8
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ71xAsS0tp1
想要被爱是佩姬的主题827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4fP7AdUyGm
主角性别不是问题827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUQme1ZS3a5
内心冲突不是问题827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvoQbBeUSuZ
主角被爱就迎刃而解827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvVkGLL99Ir
看不懂这点整部书就看不了827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTZXIlCLlE9
妳的书乏人问津是这道理827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3Vx0vZqWb1
作者妳说主角口是心非827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEDAq72YTQ6
欸我说这不对827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡD9lPmiM8PW
这明摆着口非心也非827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDsuSkvJF69
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCaZMQ2rcLu
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAGmgnXLOFC
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZdO5OLvdcd
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFM4UVZO5yT
为了被爱827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFIY0ZBTTdA
连原本的性别都不要了827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTv1x0p7nIO
这主角疯的傻的827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgOcsf091xz
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpPjpWO1Vd7
女主伊莎827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBjOmgBZ3Yz
单纯的色鬼827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡn6eYxoNNMs
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1sCRoyPflM
黑化可能
艾德兰827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ76oe2gjl9d
可怜虫阿827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡISd2rLM2Ix
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6euZyf0FWZ
妳说解释不够827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdkFSEW7Poi
我到觉得清楚827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSkaORaYJi1
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQOoyTxN764
他为啥强827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOSh4QzdOSG
妳啥都没讲827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFhyyhaekJR
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5hojyzGo0m
也是除主角外最明白的角色827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHD8tyTnhYr
她就拿来爱主角的827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmeXUAAAPZk
功能性角色
还有其他许多827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOQujMJqYVe
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPgylbdEjfV
可以瞧见妳的苦心827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdu2pwxjayS
我觉得这没必要827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4Q9QdRIf74
好的台词提一次够了827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3nWg0pEFsA
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡN0DIxiTBet
我倒嫌设定囉嗦827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkrCwd9pUwM
空白很重要827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMm5g83uNzb
没明白有没明白的好处827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrljtXJwuCm
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAeMTBEIfaT
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGdaKV9Bx14
我还会继续看的827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLqf5z3HRbb
确实好看827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhhdusxlXtm
希望你这能写完827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhT2z18gbMV
能放上起点不827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHQuUdlfjoO
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpJSmABEmRo
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIvynbu7M1c
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxF3uJH4rXl
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3h6J8IJw7D
感謝你的評文827Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZqI55BfQS2
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