感謝各位的投稿!399Please respect copyright.PENANAVleJA3IXox
看了八篇不同風格的故事!真讓人開心!399Please respect copyright.PENANAql3bHP7GF5
先恭喜得獎的故事,夢墨為得獎篇章此附上短短的心得~399Please respect copyright.PENANAg1umAleEvK
心得就只是夢墨個人的感受及想法399Please respect copyright.PENANAIQ2MwkIJiw
並沒有說寫得不好或是特優,純粹夢墨喜不喜歡而已
另外人氣獎以「喜歡數量」多的故事獲得!399Please respect copyright.PENANAja0WN7u07Y
就那麼剛好的,第一名也同為人氣獎得主!399Please respect copyright.PENANA1lhSkOjgy9
再次恭喜《Cứu, cứu cháu với》
第一名:《Cứu, cứu cháu với》399Please respect copyright.PENANAojHAndWw6n
(兼人氣獎得主)399Please respect copyright.PENANAWvUkzbhSXy
以日常作為開頭偷玩電腦、尋找訊號XD399Please respect copyright.PENANAmMnhSozp0p
這讓也偷玩過電腦的我非常有共鳴W399Please respect copyright.PENANAFBezH3pRCL
除了開頭很逗之外,還有就是突然出現的神祕亂碼+恐怖畫面!399Please respect copyright.PENANAK6Qgb4t0be
其實到這裡我還沒什麼感覺,只認為「唉唷!有點看頭!」399Please respect copyright.PENANAHKfhDriKG2
結果後續結尾意外二連發!399Please respect copyright.PENANAqp8SRWxELW
不管事移工慘劇還是Cứu, cứu cháu với的原意399Please respect copyright.PENANAnUuoQjxbkf
這在整天看完之後,都讓我有種心有餘悸的感覺399Please respect copyright.PENANAJyfALC9Ob5
用字簡單明白,劇情樸實無華,卻令人覺得真有其事399Please respect copyright.PENANAFlteLiHUqp
恭喜我說你聽撰寫《Cứu, cứu cháu với》獲得第一名及人氣獎
第二名:《廊道》399Please respect copyright.PENANAFlddxJrvgq
雖然看到第二段就猜到大概結尾XD399Please respect copyright.PENANAFEIhNvSEXA
不過這種「小丑竟是我自己」的業力引爆故事很不錯399Please respect copyright.PENANAsJ7sDDu4Y5
敘述上也很像在看短片美劇那樣399Please respect copyright.PENANAQmjVHacBLj
獵奇程度我還挺喜歡的,特別是肚子裡的蟲蟲XD399Please respect copyright.PENANAkOWzAojht9
劇情上有懸疑但都被我猜到後續發展所以有點ODO唉呀~399Please respect copyright.PENANA0bYgzE5dpr
就是沒有被驚艷到,但又喜歡傑森的夢與屍體(?399Please respect copyright.PENANAVj2DmC7JkY
整題來說是很不錯的驚悚短文399Please respect copyright.PENANAbeT5x44qqh
恭喜不轉的《廊道》獲得第二名
第三名:399Please respect copyright.PENANAuzhBu88mkP
這個名次是最難抉擇的399Please respect copyright.PENANA0RQ8kvjxkA
因為我第三喜歡的文章,都是「好可惜」的狀態399Please respect copyright.PENANAruqJGVeC5y
既然是曾經競爭的三篇,就也來說一下三篇較勁的短評吧399Please respect copyright.PENANA0N9zHVrgsL
以發佈順序點評:399Please respect copyright.PENANAJL2twcCF6a
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》399Please respect copyright.PENANATLpQwly5OB
超值爽直快,一筆暢通到底399Please respect copyright.PENANAcJH7wU1GZl
渣男現身設計嚇人、渣男劈腿真相大白、鬼來了殺渣男>END399Please respect copyright.PENANAAOOsGafqbA
沒有任何曲折離奇,鬼說來就來,說殺就殺399Please respect copyright.PENANAF0aoqzjhaH
WOW!明明有點陰謀詭計卻不需要動腦直接獲得答案399Please respect copyright.PENANA2nK3tOkNip
這也是很微妙的一篇故事w399Please respect copyright.PENANAy1GRBsbIuv
但好可惜的部分,就是我沒有沒感覺到恐怖399Please respect copyright.PENANAUxHdZiwV5H
跟第二名同樣,劇情上沒有被驚艷到399Please respect copyright.PENANAOvuOYT3PYb
不過渣男便肉渣也挺舒爽的w
《乖乖文化》399Please respect copyright.PENANAqkH7HOinJl
好可惜!這篇真的要大喊好可惜!399Please respect copyright.PENANAQ7ViHMnzoy
首先引用台灣奇怪的乖乖文化我覺得很有看點399Please respect copyright.PENANAObOoP40zY9
對呀,我也覺得乖乖文化很奇妙XD399Please respect copyright.PENANAHJ0v4lcYsU
(老實說我原本不知道有這個文化,後來看某部電影才補充到這個冷知識)399Please respect copyright.PENANAzGEWlWo4dG
唉呀,故事裡那個乖乖吊飾笑得我心裡發寒399Please respect copyright.PENANAvXMHNu9XTd
我也想來瓶麥香紅茶壓壓驚399Please respect copyright.PENANACHq3VufqKT
結尾真的很可惜,因為沒有首尾呼應導致恐怖點直接消失399Please respect copyright.PENANAFwlkp5k1PK
感覺小儀真的就只是做了惡夢,其他都只是想太多了399Please respect copyright.PENANAdtI7nQj9rF
結尾建議多一點點暗示,增加故事的慣連性399Please respect copyright.PENANABcaO5WkqN7
例如:399Please respect copyright.PENANA6230jkvn1Y
小儀醒來鬆了一口氣,原來是在做夢399Please respect copyright.PENANAGEAz4FTDIo
>放學忘記去放乖乖399Please respect copyright.PENANAKkv7PJIrZ3
>回家打開冷氣時,乖乖吊飾卡在冷氣孔嘿嘿笑著(喂399Please respect copyright.PENANAVPYpGG7mnk
好啦、浮誇了,就只是希望結尾完整一些399Please respect copyright.PENANAN612GB6dPV
總結來說題材有趣、文章順暢但缺乏慣連性399Please respect copyright.PENANAx1IzOcr3DG
有種將要發寒卻嘎然而止,實為可惜
《玉妃引》399Please respect copyright.PENANA6Kt83p9l7K
宛如聊齋的古風故事399Please respect copyright.PENANAdlzJzjfg7b
以架空東晉時期桓伊的梅花引撰寫精怪戀情(?399Please respect copyright.PENANA249BqWi29s
不恐怖但很有趣,就像我前面說的宛如聊齋399Please respect copyright.PENANAsRzjjQ05Y4
不過這架空似乎出現了玄幻的設定(好微妙)399Please respect copyright.PENANAxnDFDwKKFe
雖然排版壅擠,但內容可以說是很漂亮?399Please respect copyright.PENANAVy70qt1Gj5
對,有氣氛、有畫面,就像在鬧街看見說書人坐在凳子上講民間故事
可、要說恐怖程度399Please respect copyright.PENANAoif66j9nYJ
乖乖笑得你心裡發寒贏了XDDD399Please respect copyright.PENANAVNOMBNeSxH
以中段度來說乖乖贏了,但以整體完成度玉妃引更勝一籌399Please respect copyright.PENANAjKK4Z9pUpR
畢竟乖乖文化,會讓我產生期待,然而他卻讓我跌倒了399Please respect copyright.PENANAdvr38Fih9t
玉妃引穩紮穩打,也許沒有錯愕驚奇,但他有離奇軼聞399Please respect copyright.PENANALIDN5cUQVL
新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件介於兩者之間399Please respect copyright.PENANA2BVttPDs1j
這篇有屬於自己的狗血風格,彷彿看到了某色水玲瓏
歷經幾小時的掙扎(對,都凌晨了我還在思考難以入眠399Please respect copyright.PENANAU3o4hY38k3
我還是決定把第三名頒給乖乖399Please respect copyright.PENANAYnTTgkhjAK
畢竟能用短短五百字以內就引起我的期待,一秒過後讓我跌倒399Please respect copyright.PENANA1Izq3u7VNr
這也算有點厲害的鬼故事啊(初次閱讀衝擊性來說399Please respect copyright.PENANAZHZodo7Cha
恭喜夏夜的風《乖乖文化》獲得第三名
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》和《玉妃引》399Please respect copyright.PENANAI3eiwYfOgr
個別獲得夢墨特別獎50金幣打賞
其餘未獲獎的文章也能獲得10金幣打賞399Please respect copyright.PENANAMbliA17wpU
再次感謝各位的參與!下次有機會開創挑的話!歡迎再來玩!