感謝各位的投稿!448Please respect copyright.PENANAtO6LX7kTnQ
看了八篇不同風格的故事!真讓人開心!448Please respect copyright.PENANAWD8rcaWW0S
先恭喜得獎的故事,夢墨為得獎篇章此附上短短的心得~448Please respect copyright.PENANAaNVpcvyvsT
心得就只是夢墨個人的感受及想法448Please respect copyright.PENANAhKLDKEuhuC
並沒有說寫得不好或是特優,純粹夢墨喜不喜歡而已
另外人氣獎以「喜歡數量」多的故事獲得!448Please respect copyright.PENANALHIufRkZyb
就那麼剛好的,第一名也同為人氣獎得主!448Please respect copyright.PENANAKKyUEHoLXy
再次恭喜《Cứu, cứu cháu với》
第一名:《Cứu, cứu cháu với》448Please respect copyright.PENANAQV5fimMkhq
(兼人氣獎得主)448Please respect copyright.PENANAcLdRRDRllT
以日常作為開頭偷玩電腦、尋找訊號XD448Please respect copyright.PENANAe6lCVZpfbk
這讓也偷玩過電腦的我非常有共鳴W448Please respect copyright.PENANAX85H1VYHXG
除了開頭很逗之外,還有就是突然出現的神祕亂碼+恐怖畫面!448Please respect copyright.PENANAuw9p1J49jl
其實到這裡我還沒什麼感覺,只認為「唉唷!有點看頭!」448Please respect copyright.PENANADnepCxannx
結果後續結尾意外二連發!448Please respect copyright.PENANAkQ28Gywe3x
不管事移工慘劇還是Cứu, cứu cháu với的原意448Please respect copyright.PENANAhYgiq4cAJk
這在整天看完之後,都讓我有種心有餘悸的感覺448Please respect copyright.PENANA9wf323YMbR
用字簡單明白,劇情樸實無華,卻令人覺得真有其事448Please respect copyright.PENANAByS0mdfHby
恭喜我說你聽撰寫《Cứu, cứu cháu với》獲得第一名及人氣獎
第二名:《廊道》448Please respect copyright.PENANAmspOpli38t
雖然看到第二段就猜到大概結尾XD448Please respect copyright.PENANASSNDWRZT4c
不過這種「小丑竟是我自己」的業力引爆故事很不錯448Please respect copyright.PENANA0sfmjpfBGM
敘述上也很像在看短片美劇那樣448Please respect copyright.PENANAomVdpSn5nk
獵奇程度我還挺喜歡的,特別是肚子裡的蟲蟲XD448Please respect copyright.PENANA2mx3AXG3mZ
劇情上有懸疑但都被我猜到後續發展所以有點ODO唉呀~448Please respect copyright.PENANAtJ78HyZqvY
就是沒有被驚艷到,但又喜歡傑森的夢與屍體(?448Please respect copyright.PENANAzO5aXqVEXB
整題來說是很不錯的驚悚短文448Please respect copyright.PENANAGgO6K5bLK2
恭喜不轉的《廊道》獲得第二名
第三名:448Please respect copyright.PENANAWYk7F8v3r6
這個名次是最難抉擇的448Please respect copyright.PENANAMqkgxWMfDn
因為我第三喜歡的文章,都是「好可惜」的狀態448Please respect copyright.PENANAQxrkb1Tch7
既然是曾經競爭的三篇,就也來說一下三篇較勁的短評吧448Please respect copyright.PENANAXoUVlO3hlz
以發佈順序點評:448Please respect copyright.PENANAafvFbjQLZv
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》448Please respect copyright.PENANANOtQYgVRFt
超值爽直快,一筆暢通到底448Please respect copyright.PENANA5FCbaCxRqU
渣男現身設計嚇人、渣男劈腿真相大白、鬼來了殺渣男>END448Please respect copyright.PENANAeLpwduWXK1
沒有任何曲折離奇,鬼說來就來,說殺就殺448Please respect copyright.PENANAuZVysx6hqb
WOW!明明有點陰謀詭計卻不需要動腦直接獲得答案448Please respect copyright.PENANAkopugZCWMH
這也是很微妙的一篇故事w448Please respect copyright.PENANAhjWTiwHXhB
但好可惜的部分,就是我沒有沒感覺到恐怖448Please respect copyright.PENANA4xLPn1wVqY
跟第二名同樣,劇情上沒有被驚艷到448Please respect copyright.PENANAQKBgHnvgg3
不過渣男便肉渣也挺舒爽的w
《乖乖文化》448Please respect copyright.PENANAjkjtJ3o634
好可惜!這篇真的要大喊好可惜!448Please respect copyright.PENANAfNkrl2vBOF
首先引用台灣奇怪的乖乖文化我覺得很有看點448Please respect copyright.PENANAzd8DrOwtIV
對呀,我也覺得乖乖文化很奇妙XD448Please respect copyright.PENANAHT8AFTbCcq
(老實說我原本不知道有這個文化,後來看某部電影才補充到這個冷知識)448Please respect copyright.PENANAbFHaaQZSm3
唉呀,故事裡那個乖乖吊飾笑得我心裡發寒448Please respect copyright.PENANAV2kQ9VZMZj
我也想來瓶麥香紅茶壓壓驚448Please respect copyright.PENANA7mnc2BoI1L
結尾真的很可惜,因為沒有首尾呼應導致恐怖點直接消失448Please respect copyright.PENANALxSmMKZCu5
感覺小儀真的就只是做了惡夢,其他都只是想太多了448Please respect copyright.PENANAHrQQEP51rt
結尾建議多一點點暗示,增加故事的慣連性448Please respect copyright.PENANAMSEq73USH6
例如:448Please respect copyright.PENANAcQeASOdphS
小儀醒來鬆了一口氣,原來是在做夢448Please respect copyright.PENANAEtUEBaVNyS
>放學忘記去放乖乖448Please respect copyright.PENANAXl2xJBdrca
>回家打開冷氣時,乖乖吊飾卡在冷氣孔嘿嘿笑著(喂448Please respect copyright.PENANAvOIpJWWPmW
好啦、浮誇了,就只是希望結尾完整一些448Please respect copyright.PENANAQXXiHdXtj2
總結來說題材有趣、文章順暢但缺乏慣連性448Please respect copyright.PENANAKFmgNAdAhH
有種將要發寒卻嘎然而止,實為可惜
《玉妃引》448Please respect copyright.PENANAeDPxPA80Ll
宛如聊齋的古風故事448Please respect copyright.PENANA2jhUpNss2B
以架空東晉時期桓伊的梅花引撰寫精怪戀情(?448Please respect copyright.PENANAjYR0Y1IrIx
不恐怖但很有趣,就像我前面說的宛如聊齋448Please respect copyright.PENANAmoZTdMJL7M
不過這架空似乎出現了玄幻的設定(好微妙)448Please respect copyright.PENANAhAzdzcmeDf
雖然排版壅擠,但內容可以說是很漂亮?448Please respect copyright.PENANAU0dRKP4Aco
對,有氣氛、有畫面,就像在鬧街看見說書人坐在凳子上講民間故事
可、要說恐怖程度448Please respect copyright.PENANAGlt0OsFOC1
乖乖笑得你心裡發寒贏了XDDD448Please respect copyright.PENANA1MDqZIVhL7
以中段度來說乖乖贏了,但以整體完成度玉妃引更勝一籌448Please respect copyright.PENANARyfseGjqZB
畢竟乖乖文化,會讓我產生期待,然而他卻讓我跌倒了448Please respect copyright.PENANAtwy2sDfL0h
玉妃引穩紮穩打,也許沒有錯愕驚奇,但他有離奇軼聞448Please respect copyright.PENANAuw8M1OTg1T
新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件介於兩者之間448Please respect copyright.PENANAlY74LKstfF
這篇有屬於自己的狗血風格,彷彿看到了某色水玲瓏
歷經幾小時的掙扎(對,都凌晨了我還在思考難以入眠448Please respect copyright.PENANAwMCcVxs1MR
我還是決定把第三名頒給乖乖448Please respect copyright.PENANAQsoYRkWUNJ
畢竟能用短短五百字以內就引起我的期待,一秒過後讓我跌倒448Please respect copyright.PENANALpSCoEJUQh
這也算有點厲害的鬼故事啊(初次閱讀衝擊性來說448Please respect copyright.PENANAWLjB1GyiW9
恭喜夏夜的風《乖乖文化》獲得第三名
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》和《玉妃引》448Please respect copyright.PENANAbpKuzX2GNP
個別獲得夢墨特別獎50金幣打賞
其餘未獲獎的文章也能獲得10金幣打賞448Please respect copyright.PENANA2KEU5QwhK3
再次感謝各位的參與!下次有機會開創挑的話!歡迎再來玩!