感謝各位的投稿!396Please respect copyright.PENANAhq42gPtSvs
看了八篇不同風格的故事!真讓人開心!396Please respect copyright.PENANAv5Bc1DCY8q
先恭喜得獎的故事,夢墨為得獎篇章此附上短短的心得~396Please respect copyright.PENANA7fhDVIl6vj
心得就只是夢墨個人的感受及想法396Please respect copyright.PENANAB3M08FopG5
並沒有說寫得不好或是特優,純粹夢墨喜不喜歡而已
另外人氣獎以「喜歡數量」多的故事獲得!396Please respect copyright.PENANAon7F1dnT9A
就那麼剛好的,第一名也同為人氣獎得主!396Please respect copyright.PENANAR0elHKkg6l
再次恭喜《Cứu, cứu cháu với》
第一名:《Cứu, cứu cháu với》396Please respect copyright.PENANAyrDsG3fFnN
(兼人氣獎得主)396Please respect copyright.PENANAZz7ca5OxIj
以日常作為開頭偷玩電腦、尋找訊號XD396Please respect copyright.PENANAx4TaXHJdHh
這讓也偷玩過電腦的我非常有共鳴W396Please respect copyright.PENANAGhvCxHdH09
除了開頭很逗之外,還有就是突然出現的神祕亂碼+恐怖畫面!396Please respect copyright.PENANAFMphEZnud6
其實到這裡我還沒什麼感覺,只認為「唉唷!有點看頭!」396Please respect copyright.PENANATnljthN7d0
結果後續結尾意外二連發!396Please respect copyright.PENANA917P2ElCUz
不管事移工慘劇還是Cứu, cứu cháu với的原意396Please respect copyright.PENANAzxBy01tUaN
這在整天看完之後,都讓我有種心有餘悸的感覺396Please respect copyright.PENANAZlPVjzLpyl
用字簡單明白,劇情樸實無華,卻令人覺得真有其事396Please respect copyright.PENANA9Z4p43D62t
恭喜我說你聽撰寫《Cứu, cứu cháu với》獲得第一名及人氣獎
第二名:《廊道》396Please respect copyright.PENANABSmD22JSVJ
雖然看到第二段就猜到大概結尾XD396Please respect copyright.PENANAKUqzsyBOOz
不過這種「小丑竟是我自己」的業力引爆故事很不錯396Please respect copyright.PENANA5dMkAoOAaQ
敘述上也很像在看短片美劇那樣396Please respect copyright.PENANAJzshtbcGXl
獵奇程度我還挺喜歡的,特別是肚子裡的蟲蟲XD396Please respect copyright.PENANAVxezn2xnmz
劇情上有懸疑但都被我猜到後續發展所以有點ODO唉呀~396Please respect copyright.PENANAWeFdfmeOZo
就是沒有被驚艷到,但又喜歡傑森的夢與屍體(?396Please respect copyright.PENANAlHjTKcDIkc
整題來說是很不錯的驚悚短文396Please respect copyright.PENANAzd2SqzVNTi
恭喜不轉的《廊道》獲得第二名
第三名:396Please respect copyright.PENANA3ceyawiDQ4
這個名次是最難抉擇的396Please respect copyright.PENANA1XmmqYaXyY
因為我第三喜歡的文章,都是「好可惜」的狀態396Please respect copyright.PENANALp61uwJBSo
既然是曾經競爭的三篇,就也來說一下三篇較勁的短評吧396Please respect copyright.PENANANOQzq45Q55
以發佈順序點評:396Please respect copyright.PENANAog5NhKWIGE
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》396Please respect copyright.PENANAbyRUqLogGG
超值爽直快,一筆暢通到底396Please respect copyright.PENANAnqY4CbA20P
渣男現身設計嚇人、渣男劈腿真相大白、鬼來了殺渣男>END396Please respect copyright.PENANAOtAG2EZidq
沒有任何曲折離奇,鬼說來就來,說殺就殺396Please respect copyright.PENANALUJijUzptv
WOW!明明有點陰謀詭計卻不需要動腦直接獲得答案396Please respect copyright.PENANA2QPaIvmLxY
這也是很微妙的一篇故事w396Please respect copyright.PENANAJwzdfPboBn
但好可惜的部分,就是我沒有沒感覺到恐怖396Please respect copyright.PENANA8sl3XehFBG
跟第二名同樣,劇情上沒有被驚艷到396Please respect copyright.PENANAxiEDWmBOSo
不過渣男便肉渣也挺舒爽的w
《乖乖文化》396Please respect copyright.PENANAHxrGAKrlkz
好可惜!這篇真的要大喊好可惜!396Please respect copyright.PENANAkECFITjtNY
首先引用台灣奇怪的乖乖文化我覺得很有看點396Please respect copyright.PENANAUYCvNv2heN
對呀,我也覺得乖乖文化很奇妙XD396Please respect copyright.PENANATobiOzHC3F
(老實說我原本不知道有這個文化,後來看某部電影才補充到這個冷知識)396Please respect copyright.PENANAkMjhokfH9a
唉呀,故事裡那個乖乖吊飾笑得我心裡發寒396Please respect copyright.PENANAQzNimgb61h
我也想來瓶麥香紅茶壓壓驚396Please respect copyright.PENANAapLFIXja9t
結尾真的很可惜,因為沒有首尾呼應導致恐怖點直接消失396Please respect copyright.PENANAOhofNGhTlS
感覺小儀真的就只是做了惡夢,其他都只是想太多了396Please respect copyright.PENANANnt7qRGYGZ
結尾建議多一點點暗示,增加故事的慣連性396Please respect copyright.PENANAH3JMnFmYi6
例如:396Please respect copyright.PENANA92WyizhYff
小儀醒來鬆了一口氣,原來是在做夢396Please respect copyright.PENANAz1bYVn40Se
>放學忘記去放乖乖396Please respect copyright.PENANAYhVdmcUXrz
>回家打開冷氣時,乖乖吊飾卡在冷氣孔嘿嘿笑著(喂396Please respect copyright.PENANANtuSxiBWkR
好啦、浮誇了,就只是希望結尾完整一些396Please respect copyright.PENANAvqAsDhaRll
總結來說題材有趣、文章順暢但缺乏慣連性396Please respect copyright.PENANA66DKhBiT9p
有種將要發寒卻嘎然而止,實為可惜
《玉妃引》396Please respect copyright.PENANASasmRcljfg
宛如聊齋的古風故事396Please respect copyright.PENANA4N3e3xymjm
以架空東晉時期桓伊的梅花引撰寫精怪戀情(?396Please respect copyright.PENANApsJfqT4A1p
不恐怖但很有趣,就像我前面說的宛如聊齋396Please respect copyright.PENANAxhEoAymF5S
不過這架空似乎出現了玄幻的設定(好微妙)396Please respect copyright.PENANAifRdc1VoIh
雖然排版壅擠,但內容可以說是很漂亮?396Please respect copyright.PENANAMTO9y5uPOk
對,有氣氛、有畫面,就像在鬧街看見說書人坐在凳子上講民間故事
可、要說恐怖程度396Please respect copyright.PENANAPO5D84eRhj
乖乖笑得你心裡發寒贏了XDDD396Please respect copyright.PENANAyIRyGrhbeM
以中段度來說乖乖贏了,但以整體完成度玉妃引更勝一籌396Please respect copyright.PENANAYKBT9jcnHF
畢竟乖乖文化,會讓我產生期待,然而他卻讓我跌倒了396Please respect copyright.PENANAjiPgJGVJEi
玉妃引穩紮穩打,也許沒有錯愕驚奇,但他有離奇軼聞396Please respect copyright.PENANAHPvvkSaraz
新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件介於兩者之間396Please respect copyright.PENANA08uwhAdyki
這篇有屬於自己的狗血風格,彷彿看到了某色水玲瓏
歷經幾小時的掙扎(對,都凌晨了我還在思考難以入眠396Please respect copyright.PENANAmIlehiBuLH
我還是決定把第三名頒給乖乖396Please respect copyright.PENANAI2TTxSj2Oj
畢竟能用短短五百字以內就引起我的期待,一秒過後讓我跌倒396Please respect copyright.PENANAOBjsGxAIZf
這也算有點厲害的鬼故事啊(初次閱讀衝擊性來說396Please respect copyright.PENANACwkZMeq8i8
恭喜夏夜的風《乖乖文化》獲得第三名
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》和《玉妃引》396Please respect copyright.PENANAYiWjRZN8LF
個別獲得夢墨特別獎50金幣打賞
其餘未獲獎的文章也能獲得10金幣打賞396Please respect copyright.PENANArwOfpcdrUP
再次感謝各位的參與!下次有機會開創挑的話!歡迎再來玩!