感謝各位的投稿!214Please respect copyright.PENANAltnfyT73Y8
看了八篇不同風格的故事!真讓人開心!214Please respect copyright.PENANAYg0FQZSofm
先恭喜得獎的故事,夢墨為得獎篇章此附上短短的心得~214Please respect copyright.PENANAEqYNNgdpKM
心得就只是夢墨個人的感受及想法214Please respect copyright.PENANAKUxLNOCwQi
並沒有說寫得不好或是特優,純粹夢墨喜不喜歡而已
另外人氣獎以「喜歡數量」多的故事獲得!214Please respect copyright.PENANAkVKd8mo3RU
就那麼剛好的,第一名也同為人氣獎得主!214Please respect copyright.PENANAS32wTIGJmx
再次恭喜《Cứu, cứu cháu với》
第一名:《Cứu, cứu cháu với》214Please respect copyright.PENANAW8z52P5s8N
(兼人氣獎得主)214Please respect copyright.PENANAUArCakH8M5
以日常作為開頭偷玩電腦、尋找訊號XD214Please respect copyright.PENANAiDDjNS3R0e
這讓也偷玩過電腦的我非常有共鳴W214Please respect copyright.PENANANEtCmNtlcK
除了開頭很逗之外,還有就是突然出現的神祕亂碼+恐怖畫面!214Please respect copyright.PENANAxKMP4CLX3N
其實到這裡我還沒什麼感覺,只認為「唉唷!有點看頭!」214Please respect copyright.PENANANpm4yskDWG
結果後續結尾意外二連發!214Please respect copyright.PENANAGjR3UZWNEp
不管事移工慘劇還是Cứu, cứu cháu với的原意214Please respect copyright.PENANAVPtO9kz89b
這在整天看完之後,都讓我有種心有餘悸的感覺214Please respect copyright.PENANAhAM76yNvET
用字簡單明白,劇情樸實無華,卻令人覺得真有其事214Please respect copyright.PENANAI9eZoQMot2
恭喜我說你聽撰寫《Cứu, cứu cháu với》獲得第一名及人氣獎
第二名:《廊道》214Please respect copyright.PENANAehgZtYoAFb
雖然看到第二段就猜到大概結尾XD214Please respect copyright.PENANAqwt8U6EjCv
不過這種「小丑竟是我自己」的業力引爆故事很不錯214Please respect copyright.PENANAfOtTusU0Ds
敘述上也很像在看短片美劇那樣214Please respect copyright.PENANAiO8beepGQ0
獵奇程度我還挺喜歡的,特別是肚子裡的蟲蟲XD214Please respect copyright.PENANAe84kP54j1p
劇情上有懸疑但都被我猜到後續發展所以有點ODO唉呀~214Please respect copyright.PENANArSg0GfJe0r
就是沒有被驚艷到,但又喜歡傑森的夢與屍體(?214Please respect copyright.PENANA23LXhKxFQK
整題來說是很不錯的驚悚短文214Please respect copyright.PENANAj4VrvAV1Yq
恭喜不轉的《廊道》獲得第二名
第三名:214Please respect copyright.PENANAuWLnX1R6kS
這個名次是最難抉擇的214Please respect copyright.PENANAq3FUkNjGVG
因為我第三喜歡的文章,都是「好可惜」的狀態214Please respect copyright.PENANAIs0022FTSB
既然是曾經競爭的三篇,就也來說一下三篇較勁的短評吧214Please respect copyright.PENANAB3bQEEa9Po
以發佈順序點評:214Please respect copyright.PENANAwMWI4O1x4C
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》214Please respect copyright.PENANA79lbx7FhfP
超值爽直快,一筆暢通到底214Please respect copyright.PENANAzZtblocNn0
渣男現身設計嚇人、渣男劈腿真相大白、鬼來了殺渣男>END214Please respect copyright.PENANAXNYnQlzyRM
沒有任何曲折離奇,鬼說來就來,說殺就殺214Please respect copyright.PENANASscEBDjKaU
WOW!明明有點陰謀詭計卻不需要動腦直接獲得答案214Please respect copyright.PENANAK9pFEI4rrl
這也是很微妙的一篇故事w214Please respect copyright.PENANAU0Ps61vnLE
但好可惜的部分,就是我沒有沒感覺到恐怖214Please respect copyright.PENANAZTsuZp3pBL
跟第二名同樣,劇情上沒有被驚艷到214Please respect copyright.PENANAgwrPbxm43I
不過渣男便肉渣也挺舒爽的w
《乖乖文化》214Please respect copyright.PENANA4vx7E2KVD4
好可惜!這篇真的要大喊好可惜!214Please respect copyright.PENANA5Z0WKvz71i
首先引用台灣奇怪的乖乖文化我覺得很有看點214Please respect copyright.PENANANe41Tkwn2W
對呀,我也覺得乖乖文化很奇妙XD214Please respect copyright.PENANAAfMLvJT4im
(老實說我原本不知道有這個文化,後來看某部電影才補充到這個冷知識)214Please respect copyright.PENANACPsuzeXxTx
唉呀,故事裡那個乖乖吊飾笑得我心裡發寒214Please respect copyright.PENANAKOyhu8IBBj
我也想來瓶麥香紅茶壓壓驚214Please respect copyright.PENANAgpuRH7gxxi
結尾真的很可惜,因為沒有首尾呼應導致恐怖點直接消失214Please respect copyright.PENANAd2oP39A5GH
感覺小儀真的就只是做了惡夢,其他都只是想太多了214Please respect copyright.PENANAGGa8sl6Wyf
結尾建議多一點點暗示,增加故事的慣連性214Please respect copyright.PENANAi5GQaeoIk8
例如:214Please respect copyright.PENANA7XlW8UecCA
小儀醒來鬆了一口氣,原來是在做夢214Please respect copyright.PENANAp3AC7EJ86x
>放學忘記去放乖乖214Please respect copyright.PENANAywPjarJA0p
>回家打開冷氣時,乖乖吊飾卡在冷氣孔嘿嘿笑著(喂214Please respect copyright.PENANAWPjJZRpYH7
好啦、浮誇了,就只是希望結尾完整一些214Please respect copyright.PENANAUivdEuxbd8
總結來說題材有趣、文章順暢但缺乏慣連性214Please respect copyright.PENANAFVgq9scFCe
有種將要發寒卻嘎然而止,實為可惜
《玉妃引》214Please respect copyright.PENANAKtLm6IZeuY
宛如聊齋的古風故事214Please respect copyright.PENANAYFlkAMyl5t
以架空東晉時期桓伊的梅花引撰寫精怪戀情(?214Please respect copyright.PENANAQrvFFw75K2
不恐怖但很有趣,就像我前面說的宛如聊齋214Please respect copyright.PENANA3TerVAOsqz
不過這架空似乎出現了玄幻的設定(好微妙)214Please respect copyright.PENANAdFR3Vn0UZW
雖然排版壅擠,但內容可以說是很漂亮?214Please respect copyright.PENANAprCOTqlsv3
對,有氣氛、有畫面,就像在鬧街看見說書人坐在凳子上講民間故事
可、要說恐怖程度214Please respect copyright.PENANA3lwV9ATBZu
乖乖笑得你心裡發寒贏了XDDD214Please respect copyright.PENANAEZ5336kNdu
以中段度來說乖乖贏了,但以整體完成度玉妃引更勝一籌214Please respect copyright.PENANAuOfpqD2RW4
畢竟乖乖文化,會讓我產生期待,然而他卻讓我跌倒了214Please respect copyright.PENANA86AlHVyz2b
玉妃引穩紮穩打,也許沒有錯愕驚奇,但他有離奇軼聞214Please respect copyright.PENANAHwiRLt8fE6
新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件介於兩者之間214Please respect copyright.PENANAasqA9V2J8H
這篇有屬於自己的狗血風格,彷彿看到了某色水玲瓏
歷經幾小時的掙扎(對,都凌晨了我還在思考難以入眠214Please respect copyright.PENANAIbFoYQYFjE
我還是決定把第三名頒給乖乖214Please respect copyright.PENANAMdIq0IbLh6
畢竟能用短短五百字以內就引起我的期待,一秒過後讓我跌倒214Please respect copyright.PENANAUUg07aLSVE
這也算有點厲害的鬼故事啊(初次閱讀衝擊性來說214Please respect copyright.PENANAaSw77TNgrh
恭喜夏夜的風《乖乖文化》獲得第三名
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》和《玉妃引》214Please respect copyright.PENANAAYOOCe4x5X
個別獲得夢墨特別獎50金幣打賞
其餘未獲獎的文章也能獲得10金幣打賞214Please respect copyright.PENANA4rhWCtF6yD
再次感謝各位的參與!下次有機會開創挑的話!歡迎再來玩!