
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』274Please respect copyright.PENANAKS6oQenJps
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:274Please respect copyright.PENANA5SvPaysVY8
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐274Please respect copyright.PENANAqBrekv3rik
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆274Please respect copyright.PENANASfuUJFKHCT
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲274Please respect copyright.PENANAntY5QCYYxY
帶出角色支線274Please respect copyright.PENANA9A3Z4CBkJn
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破274Please respect copyright.PENANAJVn7nQDbfP
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫274Please respect copyright.PENANAUnL9aIkx8H
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴274Please respect copyright.PENANAS60p2XQtbZ
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌274Please respect copyright.PENANAsb9edAhmtW
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊274Please respect copyright.PENANAg3RIFbd65f
殺人犯vs富婆274Please respect copyright.PENANARnxXLb7X3Y
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌274Please respect copyright.PENANAabteozxlVz
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴274Please respect copyright.PENANAvEW2FOpJwR
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕274Please respect copyright.PENANAkeMh6HtbXp
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。274Please respect copyright.PENANAzKZY5PHIYs
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。274Please respect copyright.PENANACn31B3YUhi
魂之詩274Please respect copyright.PENANA4F65EOuhU1
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