
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』302Please respect copyright.PENANATYqX7FTxEd
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:302Please respect copyright.PENANAz4zfwrr6AL
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐302Please respect copyright.PENANAz56H8u5thg
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆302Please respect copyright.PENANAorAbtPjW9h
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲302Please respect copyright.PENANA2ZEKF4bHF7
帶出角色支線302Please respect copyright.PENANAeXZC1jvpgt
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破302Please respect copyright.PENANAivXgIHa5PA
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫302Please respect copyright.PENANAHesfBUonth
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴302Please respect copyright.PENANA697FXUHIaf
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌302Please respect copyright.PENANAlBsetG0cxj
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊302Please respect copyright.PENANAXp0X3Mlb1c
殺人犯vs富婆302Please respect copyright.PENANAJg3fCQOV7H
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌302Please respect copyright.PENANA2F7sTDf5jO
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴302Please respect copyright.PENANAog2WNVY7T2
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕302Please respect copyright.PENANA1BWYlTxjRU
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。302Please respect copyright.PENANAhbHRWVnPRw
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。302Please respect copyright.PENANAKopYAsVIFp
魂之詩302Please respect copyright.PENANAtyrruefPhH
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