
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』341Please respect copyright.PENANAjnYcokhQcH
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:341Please respect copyright.PENANA0n1WzEhHbN
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐341Please respect copyright.PENANAw4DtbbC96A
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆341Please respect copyright.PENANAhXKtpcGEIR
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲341Please respect copyright.PENANAXk5XuLvAL3
帶出角色支線341Please respect copyright.PENANAUgC2UEI34t
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破341Please respect copyright.PENANAvsvi96k0DN
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫341Please respect copyright.PENANAnbPcGFoP10
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴341Please respect copyright.PENANAgGhPWg6Uah
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌341Please respect copyright.PENANAPCsHMgFdyG
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊341Please respect copyright.PENANA8NDmlqOupa
殺人犯vs富婆341Please respect copyright.PENANALIkYJqwKLx
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌341Please respect copyright.PENANAZCnZFHzVwD
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴341Please respect copyright.PENANAG4Qpblhj1l
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕341Please respect copyright.PENANA4twVE7D5By
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。341Please respect copyright.PENANAh1Bv9DYOfM
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。341Please respect copyright.PENANA9lYrTqTcCE
魂之詩341Please respect copyright.PENANAR1g4U204x3
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