
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』294Please respect copyright.PENANAHc0RnTMuZd
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:294Please respect copyright.PENANAJfvkCpp0pu
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐294Please respect copyright.PENANAnZtAwcBs1T
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆294Please respect copyright.PENANAwQa2sMHzgR
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲294Please respect copyright.PENANAOjXgjvEK4V
帶出角色支線294Please respect copyright.PENANAMMez6TKsBe
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破294Please respect copyright.PENANAZbuI3C82CN
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫294Please respect copyright.PENANAH921X7FhG5
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴294Please respect copyright.PENANA2DW5iTqaBy
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌294Please respect copyright.PENANAn9TrjQzIQ3
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊294Please respect copyright.PENANAiQd64qwcdM
殺人犯vs富婆294Please respect copyright.PENANA6qSd7QQCWg
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌294Please respect copyright.PENANAhoTIwyKKWg
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴294Please respect copyright.PENANAUpci97Qyr7
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕294Please respect copyright.PENANABfSEwjnBbl
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。294Please respect copyright.PENANAgjkldttFgO
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。294Please respect copyright.PENANAxhIchqJ03d
魂之詩294Please respect copyright.PENANAWsq2kfIbg2
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