In the words of M. Williams
M. Williams
Dec 17, 2018 14:16641Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVJA9tOw65M
I love horror and thriller stories, but the short story "The Christmas Incident" by Zak is a favourite. 641Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1EwhhUa8ih
Firstly, I was honoured to be requested as the Beta Reader for this story and would like to thank Zak for giving me the chance.641Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡC05lwN1Khh
Secondly, the story hooks you in straight away, and you immediately feel sorry for the family because of what's happening to their son. I also felt fear for the family when reading about their son.641Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFxAVeZGWdC
He builds the suspense beautifully and makes you want to read the next part to check up on the family. Then BAM out of nowhere Zak has added in a twist that changes everything! It was crazy, but masterfully done!641Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ08EwJP7wlX
It is well worth the read, so pop on over to his page and take a look! You won't be disappointed!641Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2ut7S9rnK0
Well done, Zak!
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