作者妳好773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡci1ot8p1sa
受到妳的邀请773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfnqVHEMZTE
稍微看了下这本佩姬773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMN9eIOeRtx
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaUQrnbDEqF
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡy2Hvd2Afjn
现世一堆东西773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVnsLpWZcy1
其实就很简单一个道理773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡs2xJMrSBwY
主角想要被爱773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvSBFiPToPc
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbWvvlB9jQr
男主卢克爱773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtX73UAdQCk
主角就爱回去773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwqnZBXtoJz
女主伊莎爱773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGff3iCa0CP
主角就爱回去773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4cre7c2ZGp
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡScMtTKnaxT
想要被爱是佩姬的主题773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwU7kvPztdY
主角性别不是问题773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqQzOtg8SkT
内心冲突不是问题773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjYTQRF1YyB
主角被爱就迎刃而解773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzSlxqTs8Gt
看不懂这点整部书就看不了773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGL96r2aQBU
妳的书乏人问津是这道理773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBtFYAnbbH3
作者妳说主角口是心非773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3IhTtVA11F
欸我说这不对773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBke7mTPFyZ
这明摆着口非心也非773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKNDVOcUOeV
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6xudNIoaAs
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡORjund52la
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdyCLkOjgLD
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡt77yxbKTIz
为了被爱773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbTciRrFQad
连原本的性别都不要了773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4E0Y0dfQbi
这主角疯的傻的773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡowoXclwzKd
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBT0N8gpzX1
女主伊莎773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcmShLFAUUk
单纯的色鬼773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡC05gew2tFL
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhQ7jlMFhLV
黑化可能
艾德兰773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVY13UztyPz
可怜虫阿773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBgrNODhxPz
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡI982zwuqIs
妳说解释不够773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8OrsUlKHWl
我到觉得清楚773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdSnwi1Pbk4
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡewmURQgmKV
他为啥强773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgs2VAIb1OB
妳啥都没讲773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡR9skOHOkEX
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡS7keBJkQCG
也是除主角外最明白的角色773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7RwkBv4lSA
她就拿来爱主角的773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCC3H6lMFFR
功能性角色
还有其他许多773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGU9QFUENRO
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvLUdcTcnMh
可以瞧见妳的苦心773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUzqWCkBWRT
我觉得这没必要773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaq46uKjW9j
好的台词提一次够了773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxdunOkdgUW
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLBVkeusCqS
我倒嫌设定囉嗦773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡY3nTTIkOcL
空白很重要773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8YfDArgnn1
没明白有没明白的好处773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVCAnroX0k4
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxjjlc7pYFa
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPgmhfS9RoY
我还会继续看的773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoRmrZWtsGY
确实好看773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIRJtS4gc4J
希望你这能写完773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡziGaFgBaxU
能放上起点不773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfnZ9CdyUGv
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTnwqN5vMwW
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡh4QvjTQpZh
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8FAdGEG0yg
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpHNVlxsbIL
感謝你的評文773Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQ6qrLfBJv8
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