作者妳好828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgJMYQPCYq7
受到妳的邀请828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtaXLj8TvUI
稍微看了下这本佩姬828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMWG3AiIt0v
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoIPbKOlccH
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfv8QVVI0dt
现世一堆东西828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpCTdCKn4hD
其实就很简单一个道理828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡq7mqjOBkMo
主角想要被爱828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyaxz5EMeuM
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWb4cAlo2y8
男主卢克爱828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMgBsipdQa1
主角就爱回去828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYWbUHbg2J4
女主伊莎爱828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRcLFLUioRU
主角就爱回去828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWwul6keNfs
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoArNdvglQ3
想要被爱是佩姬的主题828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhEfvxrlP1o
主角性别不是问题828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2xCg5kNgRz
内心冲突不是问题828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUVwQoqzMro
主角被爱就迎刃而解828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEBeV4HDyND
看不懂这点整部书就看不了828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXUVkzN8DxJ
妳的书乏人问津是这道理828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ019g6fvPGt
作者妳说主角口是心非828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeWffuHESGK
欸我说这不对828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLzKnYJO9Hl
这明摆着口非心也非828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYKPot7uB37
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDEyeRLs4BX
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTtb7jjIH7h
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡi0CArCZCvb
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXbwFxzL2MO
为了被爱828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡv4ze2andFl
连原本的性别都不要了828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSoZX2wisEV
这主角疯的傻的828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ79HoPNj6eh
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡj2WTm3dZ6Y
女主伊莎828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxVy83ybgBC
单纯的色鬼828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHbagx01cz8
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQ7bEPva98c
黑化可能
艾德兰828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsWWlO83oAb
可怜虫阿828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSvVpqxZpz4
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGaYwufZkyI
妳说解释不够828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2wA2g2dqyU
我到觉得清楚828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjkeNqUrJEG
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAmGMBj6vM7
他为啥强828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2Ki9UyNpin
妳啥都没讲828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0wNV2QodC3
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ21oOwvdM9O
也是除主角外最明白的角色828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5jORUJP1YQ
她就拿来爱主角的828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuoIraHshjD
功能性角色
还有其他许多828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0UmlLVyu0a
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIl4qphcwL9
可以瞧见妳的苦心828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡj9Q1gmcUA0
我觉得这没必要828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdazVYo8a7A
好的台词提一次够了828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5KHapsqHk0
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡADdv6hr4Db
我倒嫌设定囉嗦828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtJeSRyWH5b
空白很重要828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8MdF7Nh7cH
没明白有没明白的好处828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdJoRNZYeOz
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrPJF2yNYc4
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjlFWS7M1UL
我还会继续看的828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiddu9KIaUR
确实好看828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQjubfSFE4L
希望你这能写完828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzreDjxOAeY
能放上起点不828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAXWroNHiNh
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡImqEANmm2b
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡparCoEpGgZ
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡS2GlRqSwy8
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtbBW2PRhQU
感謝你的評文828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡynlbYoZ2Ei
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