《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧239Please respect copyright.PENANAM7OZAkTIp7
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍239Please respect copyright.PENANAI1yyMDqijz
而藉由水果方式提升(味覺)239Please respect copyright.PENANAbIbjhYM1xl
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道,而不止是品詩這麼簡單239Please respect copyright.PENANALIh0BHho37
而是是人在食用時能入口即化239Please respect copyright.PENANAl44o6nqfpk
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」239Please respect copyright.PENANAzGrXecWtjW
我尤以喜歡這句,心臟當然不會跳動變慢,但內心(精神)的感覺卻可以,慢而持久239Please respect copyright.PENANAdRDWLM5ZVK
使人不會因為時間的洪流239Please respect copyright.PENANAkIkgnKwxpa
失去了炙熱239Please respect copyright.PENANAmMp9sdBW1q
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詩名為《夏,冬眠》239Please respect copyright.PENANAWVKnHhkWR3
但夏季怎麼會有雪239Please respect copyright.PENANARSARfgQ6mx
令人加以反思239Please respect copyright.PENANACxpepYTfcC
雪季不該有的畫面239Please respect copyright.PENANAImC3sF9HQ1
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲,走過歲月的容顏239Please respect copyright.PENANAbnPqBbY2wR
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或許239Please respect copyright.PENANAm4Bk8Z5NI4
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣239Please respect copyright.PENANAfWzy3bSbcZ
即便是來年239Please respect copyright.PENANAWEZKVUfuQF
之後的每一年都依然如此