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《電車》347Please respect copyright.PENANAJVihVQhWqx
在這方空間內,時間流動速度如轉動中的摩天輪。347Please respect copyright.PENANAjnkVperDPE
車廂內站著的人們擠得像沙丁魚,坐著的人們也瑟縮著,凜冽的寒風刮著車身,刮著人們的頭髮,刮著人們的耳後。347Please respect copyright.PENANAsYxiLCnfxe
當中一個少女用手機傳送著短訊,陽光照得她柔軟的髮絲烏亮了起來,長髮掩了她的小耳。347Please respect copyright.PENANACPw8J4ghwi
上面的木屑如沙粒滴下,落在乘客厚重的衣服上。347Please respect copyright.PENANAC9gKmSqLzQ
須臾,碎屑愈來愈密。突然傳來一聲震耳欲聾的巨響。上層的部分辟里啪拉的坍塌下來。347Please respect copyright.PENANA5OZHr1Cjdv
「叮……叮……」的聲音靜止了,世界靜默了。347Please respect copyright.PENANACfMaEtZNOJ
鮮血染了車廂,飄揚了腥甜。347Please respect copyright.PENANA5CjOF0L4H9
人們淒厲的哀號,驚異的餘悸,急遽的心跳,費力地呼吸著,爭取漸稀薄的空氣。347Please respect copyright.PENANAGTuDSkXyrG
少女的半張臉綻放瑰紅色的薔薇,在電車的上層崩塌的一瞬間,她的瞳瞥我一眼,她的幼臂伸向我。347Please respect copyright.PENANAtx2HMJfwRD
可是,她抓不著我。347Please respect copyright.PENANAGWiRyQhukX
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(297字)347Please respect copyright.PENANAc2ByQgnh6p
第一次參加347Please respect copyright.PENANAfudcnbFcec
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