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在這方空間內,時間流動速度如轉動中的摩天輪。523Please respect copyright.PENANAicTWI3M0Jl
車廂內站著的人們擠得像沙丁魚,坐著的人們也瑟縮著,凜冽的寒風刮著車身,刮著人們的頭髮,刮著人們的耳後。523Please respect copyright.PENANA7eAWi9Cvtn
當中一個少女用手機傳送著短訊,陽光照得她柔軟的髮絲烏亮了起來,長髮掩了她的小耳。523Please respect copyright.PENANAxv6J2L0tEt
上面的木屑如沙粒滴下,落在乘客厚重的衣服上。523Please respect copyright.PENANACMhNGaH96N
須臾,碎屑愈來愈密。突然傳來一聲震耳欲聾的巨響。上層的部分辟里啪拉的坍塌下來。523Please respect copyright.PENANAfDKDrwRiyz
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鮮血染了車廂,飄揚了腥甜。523Please respect copyright.PENANAQfJlmexqHN
人們淒厲的哀號,驚異的餘悸,急遽的心跳,費力地呼吸著,爭取漸稀薄的空氣。523Please respect copyright.PENANAsrh56BXORW
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可是,她抓不著我。523Please respect copyright.PENANAqJIPyZ8tTX
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