
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』330Please respect copyright.PENANAFCACyEoXRB
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:330Please respect copyright.PENANAlfemFuFwza
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐330Please respect copyright.PENANAjH3GzBIs9e
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆330Please respect copyright.PENANAsGfZwlrJ92
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲330Please respect copyright.PENANANhEHGmsHyp
帶出角色支線330Please respect copyright.PENANA3mFtV0f3sE
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破330Please respect copyright.PENANAbAXfezFxy4
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫330Please respect copyright.PENANALS0SfPJ07d
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴330Please respect copyright.PENANAPC806pmWdy
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌330Please respect copyright.PENANAdwGoCmLOnW
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊330Please respect copyright.PENANArItZihF9hJ
殺人犯vs富婆330Please respect copyright.PENANAxxigp1W7UM
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌330Please respect copyright.PENANAVwWL1PHmW9
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴330Please respect copyright.PENANAUAUS6wPJFZ
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕330Please respect copyright.PENANAippAlWhmb6
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。330Please respect copyright.PENANAqkdJKIsCqg
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。330Please respect copyright.PENANA8OOtKp74oE
魂之詩330Please respect copyright.PENANAM5eX4fOPr3
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