
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』297Please respect copyright.PENANAnklkx8rn25
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:297Please respect copyright.PENANAQhHSPDQL4N
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐297Please respect copyright.PENANAxTG8FNl7hW
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆297Please respect copyright.PENANAvpBuI044Kg
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲297Please respect copyright.PENANAEgPdrNz8Di
帶出角色支線297Please respect copyright.PENANA2osYTb3qpf
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破297Please respect copyright.PENANAn6LLhf6KgN
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫297Please respect copyright.PENANAdtN61jxGNn
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴297Please respect copyright.PENANAABKXngARj1
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌297Please respect copyright.PENANAhJ1GLeO8lg
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊297Please respect copyright.PENANA1PtIBYjVkh
殺人犯vs富婆297Please respect copyright.PENANAewOhpgPuOY
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌297Please respect copyright.PENANAEHQwSzPmZT
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴297Please respect copyright.PENANAE0Q1dRPU63
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕297Please respect copyright.PENANAqH82ukuzR3
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。297Please respect copyright.PENANAOgAYqQ3gHo
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。297Please respect copyright.PENANARbIsZ1FD9n
魂之詩297Please respect copyright.PENANAtXm8zfoc2C
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