《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧177Please respect copyright.PENANASOTGvw2khN
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍177Please respect copyright.PENANA3PhEvLmO23
而藉由水果方式提升(味覺)177Please respect copyright.PENANAb4ritk8tdP
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道,而不止是品詩這麼簡單177Please respect copyright.PENANAhimDGoVHSr
而是是人在食用時能入口即化177Please respect copyright.PENANAkY9fjwD2AH
177Please respect copyright.PENANA8dNyV9qNsB
「嘗試把心臟調慢」177Please respect copyright.PENANAQZFGHiPO0C
我尤以喜歡這句,心臟當然不會跳動變慢,但內心(精神)的感覺卻可以,慢而持久177Please respect copyright.PENANA8eryjwi26N
使人不會因為時間的洪流177Please respect copyright.PENANAxIDaKiLBRx
失去了炙熱177Please respect copyright.PENANATgtu7IOUIF
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詩名為《夏,冬眠》177Please respect copyright.PENANAyuGPgjFQVH
但夏季怎麼會有雪177Please respect copyright.PENANAFZebeZGOHK
令人加以反思177Please respect copyright.PENANAwQ74W1fMgM
雪季不該有的畫面177Please respect copyright.PENANAnrSFuB1QLl
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲,走過歲月的容顏177Please respect copyright.PENANAkOAYsCyJNm
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或許177Please respect copyright.PENANA4FGBChPkXO
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣177Please respect copyright.PENANAaFD7MVzQgW
即便是來年177Please respect copyright.PENANAig0mHOvjM0
之後的每一年都依然如此