感謝各位的投稿!218Please respect copyright.PENANAMYhhmj3ky2
看了八篇不同風格的故事!真讓人開心!218Please respect copyright.PENANAQGwePjfMkm
先恭喜得獎的故事,夢墨為得獎篇章此附上短短的心得~218Please respect copyright.PENANAsKods3KRod
心得就只是夢墨個人的感受及想法218Please respect copyright.PENANAzT7jTkp2ov
並沒有說寫得不好或是特優,純粹夢墨喜不喜歡而已
另外人氣獎以「喜歡數量」多的故事獲得!218Please respect copyright.PENANAi60sDpD0XL
就那麼剛好的,第一名也同為人氣獎得主!218Please respect copyright.PENANAGNXMuXsava
再次恭喜《Cứu, cứu cháu với》
第一名:《Cứu, cứu cháu với》218Please respect copyright.PENANAmYst1O86H7
(兼人氣獎得主)218Please respect copyright.PENANAA6ISZcWSkk
以日常作為開頭偷玩電腦、尋找訊號XD218Please respect copyright.PENANA3GdFWo3sK7
這讓也偷玩過電腦的我非常有共鳴W218Please respect copyright.PENANA92diLngl6m
除了開頭很逗之外,還有就是突然出現的神祕亂碼+恐怖畫面!218Please respect copyright.PENANAE5hyrSRq7S
其實到這裡我還沒什麼感覺,只認為「唉唷!有點看頭!」218Please respect copyright.PENANAq6rTVvOTRT
結果後續結尾意外二連發!218Please respect copyright.PENANAE41E9Z7od8
不管事移工慘劇還是Cứu, cứu cháu với的原意218Please respect copyright.PENANAzVLPiWtLKO
這在整天看完之後,都讓我有種心有餘悸的感覺218Please respect copyright.PENANAtC1NeMLSGr
用字簡單明白,劇情樸實無華,卻令人覺得真有其事218Please respect copyright.PENANARL2lg1rprQ
恭喜我說你聽撰寫《Cứu, cứu cháu với》獲得第一名及人氣獎
第二名:《廊道》218Please respect copyright.PENANA6NUh6ZHzif
雖然看到第二段就猜到大概結尾XD218Please respect copyright.PENANALc73bbErV7
不過這種「小丑竟是我自己」的業力引爆故事很不錯218Please respect copyright.PENANAorSPqJrjmM
敘述上也很像在看短片美劇那樣218Please respect copyright.PENANAIkA3VhALrJ
獵奇程度我還挺喜歡的,特別是肚子裡的蟲蟲XD218Please respect copyright.PENANAnkhvuv4hNW
劇情上有懸疑但都被我猜到後續發展所以有點ODO唉呀~218Please respect copyright.PENANAsWWp737xGR
就是沒有被驚艷到,但又喜歡傑森的夢與屍體(?218Please respect copyright.PENANAuPFcZJpBi2
整題來說是很不錯的驚悚短文218Please respect copyright.PENANA6d9SDvKQmt
恭喜不轉的《廊道》獲得第二名
第三名:218Please respect copyright.PENANAidgFgO5Ovt
這個名次是最難抉擇的218Please respect copyright.PENANAC7ZekkN8JX
因為我第三喜歡的文章,都是「好可惜」的狀態218Please respect copyright.PENANAlVKE2yAZm5
既然是曾經競爭的三篇,就也來說一下三篇較勁的短評吧218Please respect copyright.PENANAdIPKYwena5
以發佈順序點評:218Please respect copyright.PENANAxZPsuZsJlq
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》218Please respect copyright.PENANAfwe9uqwCke
超值爽直快,一筆暢通到底218Please respect copyright.PENANAujLM85NQme
渣男現身設計嚇人、渣男劈腿真相大白、鬼來了殺渣男>END218Please respect copyright.PENANA19EkJcUQzz
沒有任何曲折離奇,鬼說來就來,說殺就殺218Please respect copyright.PENANAl2qA1VH5lQ
WOW!明明有點陰謀詭計卻不需要動腦直接獲得答案218Please respect copyright.PENANAYbTa2efOvx
這也是很微妙的一篇故事w218Please respect copyright.PENANANGtV2qXgWy
但好可惜的部分,就是我沒有沒感覺到恐怖218Please respect copyright.PENANApOljUcLldj
跟第二名同樣,劇情上沒有被驚艷到218Please respect copyright.PENANA4lttMtH7KP
不過渣男便肉渣也挺舒爽的w
《乖乖文化》218Please respect copyright.PENANAnh5MrqUclh
好可惜!這篇真的要大喊好可惜!218Please respect copyright.PENANAKXZEEP9IZm
首先引用台灣奇怪的乖乖文化我覺得很有看點218Please respect copyright.PENANArEof5H2ZbU
對呀,我也覺得乖乖文化很奇妙XD218Please respect copyright.PENANANAFiFcNo4d
(老實說我原本不知道有這個文化,後來看某部電影才補充到這個冷知識)218Please respect copyright.PENANAMC6inbYsHB
唉呀,故事裡那個乖乖吊飾笑得我心裡發寒218Please respect copyright.PENANAvs2NV54XTo
我也想來瓶麥香紅茶壓壓驚218Please respect copyright.PENANALfmQbRK7MB
結尾真的很可惜,因為沒有首尾呼應導致恐怖點直接消失218Please respect copyright.PENANAmcx31eAgSP
感覺小儀真的就只是做了惡夢,其他都只是想太多了218Please respect copyright.PENANAX6zzYVNbIr
結尾建議多一點點暗示,增加故事的慣連性218Please respect copyright.PENANAtwPiSSBHP5
例如:218Please respect copyright.PENANAswOxGs6Qh0
小儀醒來鬆了一口氣,原來是在做夢218Please respect copyright.PENANAcra6Asfs6d
>放學忘記去放乖乖218Please respect copyright.PENANAxH1k1cnBey
>回家打開冷氣時,乖乖吊飾卡在冷氣孔嘿嘿笑著(喂218Please respect copyright.PENANAvHze8pyK4A
好啦、浮誇了,就只是希望結尾完整一些218Please respect copyright.PENANA2eCrgN3cb6
總結來說題材有趣、文章順暢但缺乏慣連性218Please respect copyright.PENANA9Ezx77VhOg
有種將要發寒卻嘎然而止,實為可惜
《玉妃引》218Please respect copyright.PENANA8WpRTeEe4P
宛如聊齋的古風故事218Please respect copyright.PENANAYhGW33WLSV
以架空東晉時期桓伊的梅花引撰寫精怪戀情(?218Please respect copyright.PENANAiPpC2Otn93
不恐怖但很有趣,就像我前面說的宛如聊齋218Please respect copyright.PENANAnYWoA8X9Jw
不過這架空似乎出現了玄幻的設定(好微妙)218Please respect copyright.PENANASiiUA323Oq
雖然排版壅擠,但內容可以說是很漂亮?218Please respect copyright.PENANAEFo1JB01t2
對,有氣氛、有畫面,就像在鬧街看見說書人坐在凳子上講民間故事
可、要說恐怖程度218Please respect copyright.PENANA2PDbf3mSX0
乖乖笑得你心裡發寒贏了XDDD218Please respect copyright.PENANAbAUofQiCBY
以中段度來說乖乖贏了,但以整體完成度玉妃引更勝一籌218Please respect copyright.PENANAgJvJnITNmj
畢竟乖乖文化,會讓我產生期待,然而他卻讓我跌倒了218Please respect copyright.PENANAinV10Px7Nm
玉妃引穩紮穩打,也許沒有錯愕驚奇,但他有離奇軼聞218Please respect copyright.PENANAHSLzYnclbf
新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件介於兩者之間218Please respect copyright.PENANAm4cvIoO5Q8
這篇有屬於自己的狗血風格,彷彿看到了某色水玲瓏
歷經幾小時的掙扎(對,都凌晨了我還在思考難以入眠218Please respect copyright.PENANApXBxa4YP7I
我還是決定把第三名頒給乖乖218Please respect copyright.PENANArM9CIacvmr
畢竟能用短短五百字以內就引起我的期待,一秒過後讓我跌倒218Please respect copyright.PENANAwYTi2EuDT9
這也算有點厲害的鬼故事啊(初次閱讀衝擊性來說218Please respect copyright.PENANA7m8xhvnIml
恭喜夏夜的風《乖乖文化》獲得第三名
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》和《玉妃引》218Please respect copyright.PENANAAWPa5qQ7It
個別獲得夢墨特別獎50金幣打賞
其餘未獲獎的文章也能獲得10金幣打賞218Please respect copyright.PENANAprIT9sGDn1
再次感謝各位的參與!下次有機會開創挑的話!歡迎再來玩!