A rather scathing poem about religion, and the many negatives that come with it
Few poems trying to depict feelings of soldiers. Named after a song lyrics that were never made to a song, cause I can't play any instrument and couldn't record it.
Just some poetry I've written in the past, present, and future. Sorry if it comes off as edgy or overly dramatic, I picked the better ones.
I would love some feedback on these, so I can improve this side of my writing so it doesn't come off as bad.
Love, loss, etcetera... typical poetic self-pity. A few songs thrown in too...
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I write poems and put them here. If they don’t make sense to you, remember this: The words you read upon this virtual website came out of my head, not yours. They aren’t supposed to make sense, but are supposed to be thought provoking and slightly interesting. Hope you like my poetry regardless!
My second volume of poetry, containing a more raw or aggressive approach.
This book is a collection of my poems, thoughts and letters.
You are the water I am the fish
You are the plant I am the sun
Every happy is happen
Every lucky is happen
Every excited is happen
Come here my life
The life is mine
I will give the world what I can
The life is a choose
The life is a chance
The life is a fighting
"She hugged the grandparents she thought fond of,
Not knowing she would be dragged through the rough.
As her shelter left, the grandparents smiled
Hiding their inner demented child."
"When she closed her eyes and the darkness consumed her
She knew she was trapped.
When the scratching didn't stop and her body trembled in pain
She knew she wouldn't escape."
Based on a true story.
Hey! I'm a teenager who likes to write poems in their spare time. I decided to post them here, so please enjoy them! Constructive criticism is appreciated along with any comments.