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The story revolves in a world where everyone has abilities, that come from essence.

Synopsis: Raphael Bragança also known as Raphael Alexandria, a member of royal family and the anticipated successor of House Bragança and Alexandria, embodies the epitome of perfection. His talents, knowledge, demeanor, charisma, kindness, physique and physical appearance have earned him both acclaim and ridicule. Being so exceptional and amiable, he has become an easy target for criticism, serving as an outlet for others' envy. Though criticism is painful, Raphael has learned firsthand that it is not the only means by which to inflict harm.

Raphael finds himself utterly broken, devoid of strength, hope, and aspirations. He feels feeble and despondent, a result of the world that has brought him to such a low point. In this state, he seeks solace in two contrasting desires. On one hand, he yearns to establish a realm of peace and prosperity. On the other hand, he harbors the less virtuous inclination to utterly destroy his enemies. Alas, often the most ordinary or mundane goals prove to be the most challenging to attain.