其實這首並不算正式的詩,38Please respect copyright.PENANA4SYSIAfaOB
幾乎沒有用到任何詩體,38Please respect copyright.PENANAu8W1DEJUIR
就算真的有也只是巧合(沒有特別去查或故意使用)38Please respect copyright.PENANAeXqy1sJsb4
勉強來說是新詩(結構比較不嚴謹)吧!
這題一樣是先有答案才有題目的~38Please respect copyright.PENANAFQdEqoFLHi
而這首詩是由昨晚的一場夢開始構築的。
夢中的場景是這樣的,38Please respect copyright.PENANAPakl5ezwhn
心中有著各種混亂(壓力或者恐懼或者哀傷、絕望),38Please respect copyright.PENANAioSdXaSRAt
為了讓自己能夠靜下心來,38Please respect copyright.PENANAapPAD4DjPM
我開始寫書法。38Please respect copyright.PENANAvqJtkUrohh
這個書法的第一句叫做38Please respect copyright.PENANABVVvh30Squ
「天地無用」38Please respect copyright.PENANADiuWZSGnSr
結果用這個字偏小,38Please respect copyright.PENANAT0UAz3atEQ
潛意識告訴我那是因為我對自身感到無能,38Please respect copyright.PENANAvKtCIqLJYF
所以才會越寫越沒自信~38Please respect copyright.PENANASkzA2cetvq
接著想要寫上另外三句,把整首詩補齊,38Please respect copyright.PENANAUaXD7NtdAi
所以最後的版本是:
天地無用38Please respect copyright.PENANAj6WWxmu50y
山河不移38Please respect copyright.PENANA5OXHmlEujR
人間有情38Please respect copyright.PENANAYEDBMhZn7m
日月無雙
在練習的過程中,38Please respect copyright.PENANAoNG5g1rC91
似乎練了1~2個小時,38Please respect copyright.PENANAmFGLquYdHQ
不過字的大小幾乎一致,38Please respect copyright.PENANAl3K1SLmWNt
雖然一撇的捺還是如國小時那樣收尾收不好,38Please respect copyright.PENANA6T1rGlbfgX
但是心終於靜下來,38Please respect copyright.PENANAX3XxGgRGMX
只是手也爆酸~38Please respect copyright.PENANADjylg5IMBi
於是我就醒來了。
先來分析到底這首詩(雖然可能不算詩)代表的涵義吧。38Please respect copyright.PENANAeFICOGe7iB
第一句的天地無用,38Please respect copyright.PENANAmn6jXvpqzL
是暗指天與地也幫不了你,你必須靠自己來解決問題。38Please respect copyright.PENANA72BMdfUy9O
第二句的山河不移,38Please respect copyright.PENANA0Ic1BYlnit
其實也可以寫作山海不移,38Please respect copyright.PENANACLa36YYiYl
但是好像是第二個字的平仄要跟第一句相反(地和河、用和移),38Please respect copyright.PENANAj1NEYfnwqZ
所以才改用河。38Please respect copyright.PENANAayWWNmjpgU
其實跟第一句類似,就是38Please respect copyright.PENANAKa3mRxb7XF
山不轉,路轉。38Please respect copyright.PENANAssNuj5et6n
路不轉,人轉。38Please respect copyright.PENANAPbl8uQsToL
的意思。38Please respect copyright.PENANA0EdKG5j6uH
第三句的人間有情,38Please respect copyright.PENANAPAfiqCNBzW
是說在困境中,還是要相信人間溫暖、相信愛,38Please respect copyright.PENANAxcaat6YljK
要看陽光面、不要鑽牛角尖,38Please respect copyright.PENANAqoAo0IGLUe
也可以說是如果自己不行時,那就找親朋好友幫忙。38Please respect copyright.PENANAPiVh4R1SLV
最後一句的日月無雙,38Please respect copyright.PENANAJgQoqq4s9X
指的就是一枝草一滴露,38Please respect copyright.PENANANJG5vMSmMp
也就是說每個人都是獨特的,38Please respect copyright.PENANAYnZ16QTkTw
即便是日和月,也都是唯一的38Please respect copyright.PENANActNYBBBRYp
(就算是神話的九個太陽也只剩一個啦!)
這首詩是對應我的什麼心境就跳過吧!38Please respect copyright.PENANAarYK3Btx6f
但是我為什麼會覺得這首很適合獻給學長呢?
這邊我們假設學長的煩惱是控制慾(反向面則是不想被控制),38Please respect copyright.PENANAvuUN3SGKwn
不要問我為什麼這樣通靈~38Please respect copyright.PENANAGNJxCct2JO
再回來看看那首詩:38Please respect copyright.PENANAgUpdacV3l9
第一句的天地無用,38Please respect copyright.PENANAotgVtE4Zc5
雖然學長出生在合眾地區的道館世家,38Please respect copyright.PENANA1BIfgr3nBU
然而他卻來到藍莓學園,38Please respect copyright.PENANAhS4uKXl0XV
並且成為聯盟社(學生高度自治)的社長~38Please respect copyright.PENANAnOHAswVTvH
即使平常看起來懶散,38Please respect copyright.PENANAGgP8leryjN
對戰時卻不馬虎~38Please respect copyright.PENANACIroFJNaiP
我相信這並不是因為他的家世背景或從小的訓練,38Please respect copyright.PENANA5kKfjqLpNt
就能達到這樣的成就~38Please respect copyright.PENANAjduzDiUPf5
不然他也不會就這樣敗給烏栗(相較之下沒有那樣的背景)
接著第二句的山河不移,38Please respect copyright.PENANA7jfgS7UfZR
雖然是馴龍師,但是喜歡寒冷。38Please respect copyright.PENANApGX2t1I9Nx
對戰中會看到他的寶可夢有許多反制剋龍系的技能,38Please respect copyright.PENANAY3UYNsjADp
因此即使想要用剋屬性贏過杜若也不是那麼容易~38Please respect copyright.PENANAYcWRz6jlKq(除非你作弊使用神獸)38Please respect copyright.PENANAavdeZHAeaZ
即便龍系也有弱點,38Please respect copyright.PENANA3wKEpZGoHz
他也能隨機應變讓自己扭轉局面、38Please respect copyright.PENANA5ysFdVijWj
反敗為勝!
第三句的人間有情,38Please respect copyright.PENANAvS50KkiHN9
儘管連工作人員都不信任他、38Please respect copyright.PENANA30dw6Ilx51
紫竽又指責他、38Please respect copyright.PENANASrClmO1M2b
連小學弟赤松也希望他做什麼事情,38Please respect copyright.PENANA9D1BRSzVrN
能跟自己討論,不然會被人誤會或讓別人反感~38Please respect copyright.PENANAYASx0SJ1LJ
他還是關心四天王的大家還有烏栗以及主角們。
最後一句的日月無雙,38Please respect copyright.PENANAoFSlfuTCuN
這句其實是這首詩的重點,38Please respect copyright.PENANAchbHVrsUlI
這個日月倒不是指太陽與月亮寶可夢~38Please respect copyright.PENANAFMcnpkXXGb
意思是希望他不要計較特別,38Please respect copyright.PENANA8UVHDk06yr
而希望他能專注在獨特上面。
曾經有位友人出了一本書,38Please respect copyright.PENANAJqaMkNpiag
其中一個觀點就是「Special vs Unique」38Please respect copyright.PENANAWU5egoNXNN
我們常常會著重在Special上面,38Please respect copyright.PENANAuPoyXBDkiL
比方喜歡的人、偶像明星、老師長輩上司...38Please respect copyright.PENANAfDTpnAnK2Q
這些都是各種意義上的Special,38Please respect copyright.PENANAwGuRNZaFQo
而我們有時候也希望自己成為Special的人。
然而,38Please respect copyright.PENANAvHMxJel8Ea
有時候這樣的執著也會帶給自己困擾,38Please respect copyright.PENANAmTIORczp6g
甚至舉步維艱...38Please respect copyright.PENANA2uCH1xow5y
有些人甚至因此想不開、一直鑽牛角尖...
然而每個人都是獨一無二的,38Please respect copyright.PENANAcX3vVunrXW
即便是長相類似的人、即便是雙胞胎,38Please respect copyright.PENANAB0gaj4c45K
也有不同的個性、興趣、志向,38Please respect copyright.PENANApJ62l4QIJW
甚至我認為複製人,38Please respect copyright.PENANA6dFt7PS1RX
也會有不同的人生目標和原則~
為什麼會獻給學長這句話呢?38Please respect copyright.PENANANp9LSERZ9K
學長霸著社長的位子卻不認真做事情,38Please respect copyright.PENANAWfhzq6li2T
這是為什麼呢?38Please respect copyright.PENANAJ2WyPhtyBn
還有留級三年看似無所謂,38Please respect copyright.PENANAcP0oLaa1nc
但是他與八朔老師的對話卻耐人尋味~
畢竟這些都是我腦補的東西,38Please respect copyright.PENANAj9xlpo32h4
所以就只是分享我淺薄的見解了~38Please respect copyright.PENANAwIwQrMCwzj
除了獻給學長這首詩,38Please respect copyright.PENANAYV8OTtDjIm
也希望自己能做到~38Please respect copyright.PENANAPrawnn75ZL
彼此共勉之!
6/21 完
p.s. 這首詩絕不是暗指我的名字是詩字輩的那個詩喔~
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