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Romance
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As We Go Up In Flames...
Writer I-Dont-Like-I-Obsess
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  • G: General Audiences
  • PG: Parental Guidance Suggested
  • PG-13: Parents Strongly Cautioned
  • R: Restricted
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As We Go Up In Flames...
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Comments ( 10 )
jelly.jaybee - I think we need to get a super-like button. This was brilliant, really beautifully written ***
2 years agoreply

jelly.jaybee - I just see now that this was posted eons ago, but rather late than never haha
2 years agoreply

I-Dont-Like-I-Obsess - @jelly.jaybee, I still appreciate reviews on all my work. Thank you! :)
2 years agoreply

Ari Finn - This is a very good short story! I really like the simplicity of it but also the fact that you didn't skimp it on the details. It's brief but very emotionally driven. I look forward to reading more from you. ;)
4 years agoreply

I-Dont-Like-I-Obsess - Ah! Thank you! ^_^
4 years agoreply

Ramen Noodles - Nice! This was a pleasant read with a common symbol of love and romance: the rose.
4 years agoreply

I-Dont-Like-I-Obsess - Thank you! :)
4 years agoreply

roseofnoonvale - Well done. I really enjoyed this
4 years agoreply

Rippy - I liked the little story. I nice read with maybe zero mistakes, unless: In one, emotion-driven impulse COMMA- unless that needs a comma. Anyway, I liked it
4 years agoreply

I-Dont-Like-I-Obsess - Personally I was unsure about the last line. I might go back and tweak it later. :)
4 years agoreply

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