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#12

Blaze of Glory

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero
Comments ( 14 )
weirdguy96 - I was like, "What does that general have to do with these guys?"

And in the end I was like, WOW! Kinda had a fresh feel to it. Great work. Like others said, this would be nice if put as a story :))
4 years ago
Kokiri-Hylian-Hero - Wow, thanks! I'm pretty surprised Blaze of Glory is such a big hit, delightfully surprised, that is! I'm glad so many people like this.
4 years ago
weirdguy96 - @Kokiri-Hylian-Hero, The storyline was nice. That was one thing. The writing quality was good too; an important criterion for me to like someone's work :)))
4 years ago
Kokiri-Hylian-Hero - @weirdguy96, I'm glad to hear it! :-}
4 years ago
Naerie - What @Jess Rufus said. MAKE THIS INTO A STORY. Pls.
4 years ago
Kokiri-Hylian-Hero - Oh, that's two for this, I was honestly not expecting this reception.

I'm looking forward to finishing up NoNaWriMo, so I'll have more time for this project, but I still don't know if I should make this a later chapter or the first chapter, do some background work surrounding this chapter, or just write what happens after this event.

Imagine if the heroes face the dark lord, dark lord kills them, then slinks away to lick wounds, and new heroes rise from the ashes of the kingdom to finish the job.
4 years ago
Naerie - @Kokiri-Hylian-Hero, That was a really long run on sentence, but I guess its up to you really! :)
4 years ago
Kokiri-Hylian-Hero - @CaitlinJHunter, Yeah, I'll edit that so my thoughts aren't a scattered mess, but you see my three choices...hmm, maybe the answer is to make a fourth choice? Oh, I think I have an idea...I'll just let my thoughts stew a while, see what pops out at me.
4 years ago
Naerie - @Kokiri-Hylian-Hero, Haha! Maybe just finish your NaNo works first. :)
4 years ago
Jess Rufus - 80
CLIFFHANGER 

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY AT SOME POINT OR SOMETHING. PLEASE
4 years ago
Kokiri-Hylian-Hero - Well, I ended it like that on purpose, an ambiguous ending for Earthlings and Martians alike, do they all die, or does the blast that the general anticipates never happen?

Kind of leave it to the reader, as THE end or new beginning, but the thought did cross my mind to tell the story of the aftermath, we'll see where it goes, though!
4 years ago
Jess Rufus - @Kokiri-Hylian-Hero, it has a very mysterious ending to it, which is really killing me right now ;D but otherwise I love it. I really of hope you'll consider extending it in the future! ;) 
4 years ago
Kokiri-Hylian-Hero - @Jess Rufus, I'm glad you like it so much, despite the ending! I'll probably think of something.
4 years ago
Jess Rufus - @Kokiri-Hylian-Hero, Yay!! :) 
4 years ago
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