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Faded White(五線變奏曲)
Oct 3, 2017
5 Mins Read
1,060 Words
No Plagiarism!0haneNXwx3wRamHQ8n6Wposted on PENANA

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Faded White is a fantasy audio story (Total of 4 books) combined with different verity of music including EDM, Artcore, Orchestra music, Classic music, pop music etc., set in 1917 (near WW1), where people in there performed music to do daily work (i.e music in there has some sort of magic which could do several things, including control objects, manipulating people minds, physical and mental healing, creating illusions etc.).copyright protection81PENANAvLtG9Iu7e2

Backgroundcopyright protection81PENANAaLTk7BbgZi

  One of the countries named Démocratie was once the vassal state of Feudalismus. Yet in 19 century, nobles of Feudalismus were indulged in luxurious life, thus raised taxes unreasonably high. This was the last straw for the people of Démocratie, they revolt against the useless king and the army of Feudalismus which claimed to protect the king. (Using the French revolution as the blueprint) As the battle in Marseille has marked the success of the revolution and Démocratie has changed a trias politica country, while Feudalismus remained as a monarchy.copyright protection81PENANAdwnay3hnZ3

  As Feudalismus Army mainly plays slow songs as a way of torture, Council of Démocratie has agreed to ban any performance of any slow tune, or they shall receive a heavy penalty or even death sentence. At the early 1900s, modernize of military has brought the tension of two countries high, fear of another war coming, Démocratie military decided to rebuilt the Aileen College and train students to become new musicians, which later Sofie and Chen Hsing-Hui will study in.copyright protection81PENANAzvP3bZMG60

The first book will first describe Sofie's school life, including being discriminated as she couldn't pass the standard tempo thus failed the first test, later professor Alberto has managed to help her and teach her to perform faster songs. She also met new friends after Chen Hsing-Hui forced her to perform in front of her classmates. Between that Sofie dreamed about her mother.copyright protection81PENANAIgMBBUdMbc

After some time Sofie has dealt with the bullying, she was being kidnapped by a Fedualismus spy, which then she learned the situation in there and their people. The spy released her when he successfully escaped.copyright protection81PENANA4oIrzhvQFu

After Sofie return, she was praised as a genius as few can survive from that. And thus Sofie became the center of the school. May write sth about joining clubs or any activities.copyright protection81PENANAUfZJjbJ5RP

When Sofie almost finished year 2, the war began and they were forced to go to the trenches. Sofie and Chen Hsing-Hui became nurses. Yet during one assault, enemy forces have broken the defense line.copyright protection81PENANA6z5TbHNotY

Place and the warcopyright protection81PENANABymkZVBuMh

All story scene will be based on France and Germany, may have slight modify between the names. While the war(the war will begin in the middle of the first book and end at the last book) will be based on WWI, musicians are still considered as experimental soldiers. The war will still be using guns, tanks, trenches as the main weapon. (Musicians on war have different branches, including healing, stormtrooper, spy etc., but most will be used as entertainment for soldiers.)copyright protection81PENANAZHwYrP9aV0

Characters in the first bookcopyright protection81PENANAZ1z5VKMI9g

Sofie Anlisa(蘇菲安麗莎)copyright protection81PENANAHKO44O0GjN

Lived in a small town named Olia (Artzenheim in real life), lost her mother at 7 and father at 8 so moved with her relative to Belfit (Belfort in real life), where she met with Chen Hsing-Hui and become friends. Later studied in Aileen College and get bully as she cannot pass the first test due to her tune are too slow that the teacher cannot give her a passing grade. Fortunate with the help of several people, she managed to impress others and graduated with the 8th highest score. She later became a nurse during the war.copyright protection81PENANAXiuugVkq6f

Well at playing romantic songs and few 20th century. (Maybe also well at Celtic music). Peace-lover and sometimes will do stupid things.copyright protection81PENANAr5h0bcLYVV

Chen Hsing-Hui(陳幸蕙)copyright protection81PENANAeDG3HKRHra

Lived in China and studied oversea when 9 because her family is rich and she is talented at playing music, and Sofie became her neighbor and best friend since then. Studied in Aileen College with Sofie, her first performance immediately impressed the teachers and thus have a lot of friends. Graduated at 3rd place.copyright protection81PENANAuptZTKVea1

Well at 20th-century music and oriental music. Belittle the ones play EDM, thinking "they are just a factory product under fast culture". She loves to show and tell, concerns friendship, and make quick decisions. She also has a strong connection to her country.copyright protection81PENANAuB7LCiYogU

Professor Alberto (亞伯特教授)copyright protection81PENANAkvx0yeLqWc

The oldest professor in the whole college, nicknamed "the old professor". His passed wife was a musician in Feudalismus, so he has a basic understanding of andante songs. Few teachers who are willing to help Sofie and thinks she could make great things.copyright protection81PENANABrC4qwOmKY

Professional at Baroque, Classic and Romantic songs, also interested in Oriental music. Likes to read books while drink almond tea, but most of the time he is just sleeping.copyright protection81PENANAneAu0dNYB4

Commodore Bellcopyright protection81PENANASVzqV8EGzB

Also the headmaster of Aileen College. His grandfather was a hero who stands against Feudalismus. Thus making him hates people of Feudalismus, including Alberto, although still respects him. Served as Commodore in the Navy, also studying modern music and EDM. Well at Classic music but also folk music. He seldom shows his emotions, but still, he's a good person.copyright protection81PENANATa2vet13PM

Hans Verisllecopyright protection81PENANA1c1CH1Pu0r

Spy of Feudalismus, taken Sofie as the hostage when being caught. Later tell her about his childhood and family.copyright protection81PENANAzTm8jihYZR

He's just a sidekick by now, great at Baroque music, sometimes play his melodica.copyright protection81PENANAzT1Bpg4rjU

Lily Tanakacopyright protection81PENANAdl6eXOfNjg

Come from Tokyo, she has a huge interest in machines and electronic music. Thus becoming the vice president of EDM club. Belittle Chinese especially Chen Hsing-Hui, fortunate their relation become better after Lily become friends with Sofie.copyright protection81PENANAeS9B1tUirT

Well at EDM, professional in Guzheng. Proud, independent, sometimes stubborn, a little cunning, but overall she has proven herself useful. Also, her English is broken.copyright protection81PENANA90NbBcrGDL

Selected Musiccopyright protection81PENANAAQ6H54vlRO

Since this is a story about music, needless to say, I'll get some music. Besides some music are made by me, here is a list of Youtube music channel or individual artist I will be searching. (I want to find more non-mainstream artist unless really talented, so no VEVO)copyright protection81PENANAB6HLHIeB1F

~EDMcopyright protection81PENANAvbFimhuOX7

MrSuicideSheepcopyright protection81PENANAzyYGf3KLpC

Monstercatcopyright protection81PENANAA0IhLq0011

Diversitycopyright protection81PENANAFxclPzDkoB

Proximitycopyright protection81PENANArX9qDpuobT

Pixl Networkscopyright protection81PENANA1LTJ3Fa3Gc

StrobeNetworkcopyright protection81PENANA5mJiHyRlSg

Virtual Riotcopyright protection81PENANAWkd6LRvfgG

Tobucopyright protection81PENANA8hs21wIbAo

~Artcore & Chillcopyright protection81PENANAnFL6YtFQOy

A Himitsucopyright protection81PENANA6KTjQEbmTs

Elegant Sistercopyright protection81PENANA32Jw5K2NWD

Ujico/Snail Housecopyright protection81PENANAcjjXqhq67f

In Love with a Ghostcopyright protection81PENANAEdZyxQcJc6

Yoe Masecopyright protection81PENANAbg9VMeFP2B

Laura Brehmcopyright protection81PENANAseVLcl3Drb

Gregory Alan Isakovcopyright protection81PENANAS6pSEXJRGW

Inspiracopyright protection81PENANAYSc7NYltNn

VoicedOutcopyright protection81PENANA5gC02Pm5tO

hby76012copyright protection81PENANAgmVGezDYrj

Koala Kontrolcopyright protection81PENANAUpc6wZ4SsS

Oh Wondercopyright protection81PENANAfx8SybHUga

Luke Bryancopyright protection81PENANAJxxEdMdQKF

Chopin – The Revolutionary Etudecopyright protection81PENANAaE4mKAmPsO

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rosemill2017 - may i know more about it.....
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