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Faded White(五線變奏曲)
Oct 3, 2017
5 Mins Read
1,060 Words
No Plagiarism!R0fmrmdTDnjRy9HKNu0sposted on PENANA

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Faded White is a fantasy audio story (Total of 4 books) combined with different verity of music including EDM, Artcore, Orchestra music, Classic music, pop music etc., set in 1917 (near WW1), where people in there performed music to do daily work (i.e music in there has some sort of magic which could do several things, including control objects, manipulating people minds, physical and mental healing, creating illusions etc.).copyright protection72PENANAcQmrcNOpHr

Backgroundcopyright protection72PENANAN1ila06Xv6

  One of the countries named Démocratie was once the vassal state of Feudalismus. Yet in 19 century, nobles of Feudalismus were indulged in luxurious life, thus raised taxes unreasonably high. This was the last straw for the people of Démocratie, they revolt against the useless king and the army of Feudalismus which claimed to protect the king. (Using the French revolution as the blueprint) As the battle in Marseille has marked the success of the revolution and Démocratie has changed a trias politica country, while Feudalismus remained as a monarchy.copyright protection72PENANApXwCpsTy2R

  As Feudalismus Army mainly plays slow songs as a way of torture, Council of Démocratie has agreed to ban any performance of any slow tune, or they shall receive a heavy penalty or even death sentence. At the early 1900s, modernize of military has brought the tension of two countries high, fear of another war coming, Démocratie military decided to rebuilt the Aileen College and train students to become new musicians, which later Sofie and Chen Hsing-Hui will study in.copyright protection72PENANAUfIgGU4vkL

The first book will first describe Sofie's school life, including being discriminated as she couldn't pass the standard tempo thus failed the first test, later professor Alberto has managed to help her and teach her to perform faster songs. She also met new friends after Chen Hsing-Hui forced her to perform in front of her classmates. Between that Sofie dreamed about her mother.copyright protection72PENANAX7MgtXgzUL

After some time Sofie has dealt with the bullying, she was being kidnapped by a Fedualismus spy, which then she learned the situation in there and their people. The spy released her when he successfully escaped.copyright protection72PENANAGkIcW8EPGH

After Sofie return, she was praised as a genius as few can survive from that. And thus Sofie became the center of the school. May write sth about joining clubs or any activities.copyright protection72PENANAHAWqRDlV9F

When Sofie almost finished year 2, the war began and they were forced to go to the trenches. Sofie and Chen Hsing-Hui became nurses. Yet during one assault, enemy forces have broken the defense line.copyright protection72PENANAH6NunhrDQl

Place and the warcopyright protection72PENANAoxG7KCfpsV

All story scene will be based on France and Germany, may have slight modify between the names. While the war(the war will begin in the middle of the first book and end at the last book) will be based on WWI, musicians are still considered as experimental soldiers. The war will still be using guns, tanks, trenches as the main weapon. (Musicians on war have different branches, including healing, stormtrooper, spy etc., but most will be used as entertainment for soldiers.)copyright protection72PENANA6aw3BnHWiQ

Characters in the first bookcopyright protection72PENANAC0XpukGVYx

Sofie Anlisa(蘇菲安麗莎)copyright protection72PENANAhn5XuPAKe3

Lived in a small town named Olia (Artzenheim in real life), lost her mother at 7 and father at 8 so moved with her relative to Belfit (Belfort in real life), where she met with Chen Hsing-Hui and become friends. Later studied in Aileen College and get bully as she cannot pass the first test due to her tune are too slow that the teacher cannot give her a passing grade. Fortunate with the help of several people, she managed to impress others and graduated with the 8th highest score. She later became a nurse during the war.copyright protection72PENANAGlecpPz6LR

Well at playing romantic songs and few 20th century. (Maybe also well at Celtic music). Peace-lover and sometimes will do stupid things.copyright protection72PENANAXnRVNmguhe

Chen Hsing-Hui(陳幸蕙)copyright protection72PENANA2zB7x6W7Qb

Lived in China and studied oversea when 9 because her family is rich and she is talented at playing music, and Sofie became her neighbor and best friend since then. Studied in Aileen College with Sofie, her first performance immediately impressed the teachers and thus have a lot of friends. Graduated at 3rd place.copyright protection72PENANAawwoIWdh2Z

Well at 20th-century music and oriental music. Belittle the ones play EDM, thinking "they are just a factory product under fast culture". She loves to show and tell, concerns friendship, and make quick decisions. She also has a strong connection to her country.copyright protection72PENANA90m1WancEF

Professor Alberto (亞伯特教授)copyright protection72PENANAqGf2OM8LTY

The oldest professor in the whole college, nicknamed "the old professor". His passed wife was a musician in Feudalismus, so he has a basic understanding of andante songs. Few teachers who are willing to help Sofie and thinks she could make great things.copyright protection72PENANAW4vtsdpGvs

Professional at Baroque, Classic and Romantic songs, also interested in Oriental music. Likes to read books while drink almond tea, but most of the time he is just sleeping.copyright protection72PENANAFEt2Gpc4CR

Commodore Bellcopyright protection72PENANAJ2yY5mKd7E

Also the headmaster of Aileen College. His grandfather was a hero who stands against Feudalismus. Thus making him hates people of Feudalismus, including Alberto, although still respects him. Served as Commodore in the Navy, also studying modern music and EDM. Well at Classic music but also folk music. He seldom shows his emotions, but still, he's a good person.copyright protection72PENANAc4IHxaVXRq

Hans Verisllecopyright protection72PENANApx5TzLiMPU

Spy of Feudalismus, taken Sofie as the hostage when being caught. Later tell her about his childhood and family.copyright protection72PENANADzXby2xigF

He's just a sidekick by now, great at Baroque music, sometimes play his melodica.copyright protection72PENANAWsJFahQ5eH

Lily Tanakacopyright protection72PENANAwEeCxNnQzd

Come from Tokyo, she has a huge interest in machines and electronic music. Thus becoming the vice president of EDM club. Belittle Chinese especially Chen Hsing-Hui, fortunate their relation become better after Lily become friends with Sofie.copyright protection72PENANALdNJolMWE2

Well at EDM, professional in Guzheng. Proud, independent, sometimes stubborn, a little cunning, but overall she has proven herself useful. Also, her English is broken.copyright protection72PENANACBvmgGD6MS

Selected Musiccopyright protection72PENANANix2U5QiVp

Since this is a story about music, needless to say, I'll get some music. Besides some music are made by me, here is a list of Youtube music channel or individual artist I will be searching. (I want to find more non-mainstream artist unless really talented, so no VEVO)copyright protection72PENANAwHDjq1FcYj

~EDMcopyright protection72PENANAfAULWbrAhd

MrSuicideSheepcopyright protection72PENANAs5w07r5XK1

Monstercatcopyright protection72PENANAngI0A81gl0

Diversitycopyright protection72PENANAzAAumwFN7W

Proximitycopyright protection72PENANA1z1xz9ZF6J

Pixl Networkscopyright protection72PENANAGt0otBxvRT

StrobeNetworkcopyright protection72PENANAvqu5VQCADJ

Virtual Riotcopyright protection72PENANAxEjzcTIbyP

Tobucopyright protection72PENANAVfiVDMxbho

~Artcore & Chillcopyright protection72PENANA4NPyTKowl2

A Himitsucopyright protection72PENANAfTHztUtb62

Elegant Sistercopyright protection72PENANA11hjXU6u6n

Ujico/Snail Housecopyright protection72PENANASabIJ4s7AO

In Love with a Ghostcopyright protection72PENANAaQHRqaLTmR

Yoe Masecopyright protection72PENANAVoTcHQ7Ole

Laura Brehmcopyright protection72PENANAbeonW7rpf2

Gregory Alan Isakovcopyright protection72PENANAdqSVhj63ct

Inspiracopyright protection72PENANAV8ROlyFtm0

VoicedOutcopyright protection72PENANAHye5WbdoAt

hby76012copyright protection72PENANAqNTjIbCPfO

Koala Kontrolcopyright protection72PENANAiaX9ZiIFL5

Oh Wondercopyright protection72PENANAGsEUyA6MYG

Luke Bryancopyright protection72PENANAgotaIclk1B

Chopin – The Revolutionary Etudecopyright protection72PENANA9jM6sLobr9

Comments ( 1 )

rosemill2017 - may i know more about it.....
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