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I've been planning out a high fantasy adventure story following a teenage magic user, Liz, and an amputee, Mist, as they try to restore magical balance to the world.127Please respect copyright.PENANAhCbP9idLF7
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When nightmarish, murderous creatures materialize at the source of cast magic, a magic-dependant world is plunged into chaos. Under the rule of the Eyyliks, a race of humanoid warriors who can see the magic potential in people, those found to have magic are killed on sight for fear of these creatures appearing.copyright protection123PENANAscezgk8xK4

Having fled society after she awakened, a young sorceress with healing gifts meets an amputee who believes he holds the key to ending the dangers of spellcasting. The two of them travel to the Citadel, the fortressed home of the Eyylik, in an attempt to make magic accepted in the world and prevent the Shades from appearing.127Please respect copyright.PENANA31sxBnhvqz
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It should be a long one, based on my planning. Hopefully I can get at least 50,000 words of a first draft done within next month. The research on it right now is taking up most of my time. That being said, if anyone knows anything about the after-effects of or adjustments after a forequarter amputation (or just any upper body amputation), please let me know.127Please respect copyright.PENANAayPqTw8vlZ
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Thank you! Any feedback is appreciated :)copyright protection123PENANAlltAUKU3hF

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傑斯的信封 - two things: first, since magic evil creatures are kinda common, you could think some special details (Maybe they contain some dead's memory or thoughts), or this will be too cliche; and second, what kind of main characters do you want? Do you want a normal hobbit as main or some undead matrix? 
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Imascribble - The magic creatures are actually closer to mindless summons than anything else. They're kind of a by product of magic spells. I don't want to risk "humanizing" them too much by giving them memories or anything. The world I've prepared also has a very rich religious structure, so there is a religious reason for them to exist as they are.

As for main characters, I have three planned. Liz and Mist are human, and Vyre is an Eyylik. I'm not sure what you mean by "some undead matrix."
11 months agoreply

傑斯的信封 - @Imascribble, i.e. main character who has badass abilities and somehow survive in situations where normal should be long dead
11 months agoreply

Imascribble - Oh, I hate those kind of characters. I'll be avoiding them like the plague :P
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