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weirdguy96 - Geez, where was I looking at all this time?! This character building is impressive. So far, I love all the four. Have to go to bed now but can't wait to read further! (actually I should have gone to bed before the previous one but I just could not stop)
2 years agoreply

Bookyness - Haha glad you're enjoying it
2 years agoreply

once upon a star - you're welcome! It has been a pleasure to read your story!
3 years agoreply

Bookyness - And it has been a pleasure to hear your feedback!
3 years agoreply

Bookyness - Thank you so much, I'm so happy someone has noticed these things! I really appreciate your feedback - it is wonderful to hear!
3 years agoreply

once upon a star - I liked how you chose a slightly different writing style for each character based on their character traits and their unique way of seeing the world..Luke for instance seems to be a thoughtful observer and one whose feelings are often expressed naturally through his body movements!:‘)
3 years agoreply

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