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A Game of Murder
Co-Writer peter799*
Idea Contributor Coen Wonder
Idea Contributor MaryTheGorgon
Beta Reader Cupcakes Over Ice Cream
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  • G: General Audiences
  • PG: Parental Guidance Suggested
  • PG-13: Parents Strongly Cautioned
  • R: Restricted
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A Game of Murder
A Game of Murder
Intro

After receiving a mysterious call from an unknown caller, Adrian, a detective, is kidnapped and locked inside a mansion with eleven other people. The same caller later tells everyone remotely about their purpose in the mansion; they will each be killed one by one, a death per day unless the detective can catch him/her. For the caller, it is a game. A game of murder.

Total Reading Time: 1 hour 28 minutes

6 comments

Frozen Bubbles - in blurb
8 months agoreply

Frozen Bubbles - hi I was wondering if the caller is the person you call him/her ???
8 months agoreply

Curtis Durrenberger - In the summary , having it say A mysterious call from an unknown caller is kinda redundant

Try this : 

a mysterious call from persons unknown 
4 years agoreply

peter799 - Thanks for the feedback. I'll consider it when I finish the story and revise it. :)
4 years agoreply

- Doesn't this summery remind anyone of Shnuffluv's Room?
4 years agoreply

Letterstotheunsent - You're really good at writing, just from reading your intro I can tell I will like this. Thank you for posting this!
5 years agoreply

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