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Flow - Okay first of all: Musical is not spelled with an e. Tho that can be a difference in countries/languages.

Another thing is that I've read a few chapters of this story and I remember it being pretty religious( nothing wrong with that of course), so you might want to mention it's also religious camp as well as a musical one. However,  that may be implied by the fact he had to bring a bible there. I'm pretty dense so I didn't realize that the first time I read the story.
2 years agoreply

Createology - I read that Musical and Musicale are two different words. One is basically a genre and the other is more of a just a word that specifically means 'Musical Theater.' Thanks for the feedback though! Much appreciated!
2 years agoreply

Flow - @Createology,

Well musical can also imply anything involving music, but if that is the case with the word than it makes sense
2 years agoreply

Min-T-SugaR - I can imagine it all... even though it's only at this Innocent scene where they go to camp, I'm already scared cuz I'm listening to this story's soundtrack... It sounds thrilling to be honest...
2 years agoreply

Createology - Well it's a thriller after all. 😊 It's only going to build up from here
2 years agoreply

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero - Oh, wow, it's written like a play...which gives this kind of a foreboding atmosphere, which I like.
2 years agoreply

The Virtual Shadow - I like the writing style for this, feels like a scene from the script.
2 years agoreply

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