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▌類型 短文16Please respect copyright.PENANAZpMHPuNkw3
▌作者 落花
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時隔半年再次擔任落花的短評,更是感到另一份不一樣的感覺。16Please respect copyright.PENANACpZN8Dsy0X
與#84冬梅那篇比對,這期間度過了人生好幾個階段,也同時經歷了這個創作挑戰上百篇的短評,希望這次的評論能更加客觀。16Please respect copyright.PENANAcVX8itS2Yu
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與前篇比對,#135窒愛著重在敘述對於兩人"鬥牛"方面的對手戲,尤以巴著籃球不斷進出籃框粗暴與挑逗對手的話語,更是讓人意猶未盡,想多看幾次秦白楓上籃的那種慾望。16Please respect copyright.PENANAxz1KyLrlI5
在形容黃宣麓方面,雖有「他」這個字眼帶給我閱讀時的幾分困惑,但在言情方面涉獵多年的讀者,絕對不會在意這一點點的小瑕疵,反倒如果沒有在尾段所出現的「後框」一詞,我都覺得「他」與「她」的疑問。16Please respect copyright.PENANAcCTcRRn50W
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...等等。16Please respect copyright.PENANAPiJcseSlnA
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...難道,真的是「他」。冷汗再度直流,電流直擊我內心最後的那道防線,我被破防了,是我那僅存的矜持。16Please respect copyright.PENANAAkOhwr6ciU
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鬥牛的賽事,在短篇後段,在一場次隱約又悄悄地敲響了起來,只是眾多讀者肯定想一窺究竟絕不止步於此。16Please respect copyright.PENANARqbLwBQYx4
下筆於此,魚魚完全認定這篇球賽不僅有「實用」這番解析,更是有著用詞優美的美譽,至於兩人是否僅是短暫的球場上過客,我們早就不在乎了。16Please respect copyright.PENANAUAIoLSZCs1
畢竟,讀者早就享受完了這篇萬用好文。16Please respect copyright.PENANAKRaerRxmoL
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期待,還能再見其他選手上場的好球賽。