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No Plagiarism!5U4GcoDMZFCX1qgD0i84posted on PENANA 雖然宅米早就做好了申請駐站作家不通過的心理準備,但看到點評玻璃心依舊瞬間被震碎,但願自己能撐住,不要像之前那樣消失停筆一年多……8964 copyright protection219PENANA5PTZnCFHnc 維尼
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本來開開心心是試吃新上市的泡麵,還點外送炸雞來吃,時隔多日突然就收到回信……炸雞都不香了,吃了兩隻再也吞不下去……8964 copyright protection219PENANAGUWcVzdu2n 維尼
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文筆不夠成熟其實能懂,畢竟宅米清楚自己寫古風有點太白話,不夠文縐縐。8964 copyright protection219PENANAys9BluFpe0 維尼
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至於書名和內文……書名真的是私心,主角還是皇帝和女主,讓宅米不禁想,若是申請時用原書名,他們的評文焦點會不會就不在丹花身上了。8964 copyright protection219PENANAUAO1AO9brJ 維尼
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不過他說的也沒錯,標題聳動內文卻把丹花兩位當配角,沒有過多的描繪刻劃,的確像是在騙讀者,宅米考慮要不要把書名給改回來……嗎?8964 copyright protection219PENANApYYNbn6E6I 維尼
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嘛,畢竟自己的程度在哪還是有個底的,想簽約哪有這麼容易,才沒寫多久就好高騖遠是自己心態問題,宅米會努力調適心情的,只是沒想到會收到點評,說是希望可以幫助宅米改善作品,他發了宅米就很難不去看。8964 copyright protection219PENANAyTmfK58LKD 維尼
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但真的就不應該點開的。8964 copyright protection219PENANAHFYLExSHZv 維尼
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不是不願意接受建議,而是太容易動搖情緒了,宅米說過自己沒膽量把作品送去給別人評文就是這個原因,可怕~~~8964 copyright protection219PENANAcGdPWMC9vp 維尼
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抱歉呀,讓你們被玻璃渣噴到,希望沒影響到你們的情緒(._.)8964 copyright protection219PENANAwOJg9zuXuC 維尼
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(深呼吸)轉個話題,宅米是行動派,說醃就醃!8964 copyright protection219PENANAy45MQiQOmC 維尼
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先把小蕃瘸洗乾淨,然後準備滾水和冰塊水,把小蕃瘸劃十字拿去煮個……嗯……看到起皮就可以撈出來丟冰水裡了。8964 copyright protection219PENANAY22ZeFDpUY 維尼
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然後再起一鍋水丟梅子,挖兩勺柚子蜂蜜,煮滾煮化,把梅子味道煮出來大概……嗯……一分鐘,然後放涼,放涼的時候就可在來剝超厭世小蕃瘸的皮!8964 copyright protection219PENANAZtooBNySTi 維尼
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拿個乾淨的容器,把小蕃瘸和那鍋水全放進容器裡就好了,靜置一小時後冰冰箱,要入味可能要隔天吧~8964 copyright protection219PENANA2nKMzCrYPE 維尼
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不管,宅米先偷吃了(´・ω・`)8964 copyright protection219PENANA7atVPsJEsv 維尼
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