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No Plagiarism!k63yKZbSjQKXAdBYumyFposted on PＥNAＮＡ Chapter 1.03: September 20, 20158964 copyright protection1114ＰＥＮＡＮＡZ6vwt0Ymdg 維尼
"I've finished reading your manuscript."8964 copyright protection1114ＰＥＮＡＮＡMi2VxaaAvO 維尼
"Really? Weren't you going to study for your geophysics test tomorrow?"8964 copyright protection1114ＰＥＮＡＮＡc1wTStWtPG 維尼
"I'll be fine."8964 copyright protection1114ＰＥＮＡＮＡitz4sTtq8J 維尼
"If you say so."8964 copyright protection1114ＰＥＮＡＮＡlqueIdLY6p 維尼
"Don't you want to hear what I think of your story?"8964 copyright protection1114ＰＥＮＡＮＡQWwHPDCEpG 維尼
"By all means."8964 copyright protection1114ＰＥＮＡＮＡTqgDJKqT3J 維尼
"I agree with Susy. The writing style is too lighthearted for the actual story. You should darken the tone."8964 copyright protection1114ＰＥＮＡＮＡnayhoJQpW0 維尼
"I'll do my best."8964 copyright protection1114ＰＥＮＡＮＡB4Ap1AB86i 維尼
"Also—I think her assassin friend's character is a tad underdeveloped. He has so much potential as a character."8964 copyright protection1114ＰＥＮＡＮＡeaOiBBYsUe 維尼
"I'll look into that. Thanks, Eru."8964 copyright protection1114ＰＥＮＡＮＡWFuZYUtM9L 維尼
"Anytime, Kenny. Now, if you'll excuse me, I have to study for that test tomorrow."8964 copyright protection1114ＰＥＮＡＮＡqzvHowUZEj 維尼
"I trusted you, and you lied to me."8964 copyright protection1114ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6BTqb8Gl8m 維尼
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