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No Plagiarism!9Zy7BS4rUTaDukIB5styposted on PＥNAＮＡ Chapter 1.03: September 20, 20158964 copyright protection1115ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5VGN9knnrx 維尼
"I've finished reading your manuscript."8964 copyright protection1115ＰＥＮＡＮＡyVP5Oy5iRm 維尼
"Really? Weren't you going to study for your geophysics test tomorrow?"8964 copyright protection1115ＰＥＮＡＮＡK1y6FJQFfC 維尼
"I'll be fine."8964 copyright protection1115ＰＥＮＡＮＡlXv3oL6YXD 維尼
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"Don't you want to hear what I think of your story?"8964 copyright protection1115ＰＥＮＡＮＡOXZ7nc3IFK 維尼
"By all means."8964 copyright protection1115ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7e8bJsoYom 維尼
"I agree with Susy. The writing style is too lighthearted for the actual story. You should darken the tone."8964 copyright protection1115ＰＥＮＡＮＡsgprubCyZv 維尼
"I'll do my best."8964 copyright protection1115ＰＥＮＡＮＡp2FdnwbxQn 維尼
"Also—I think her assassin friend's character is a tad underdeveloped. He has so much potential as a character."8964 copyright protection1115ＰＥＮＡＮＡLRKup6hdEG 維尼
"I'll look into that. Thanks, Eru."8964 copyright protection1115ＰＥＮＡＮＡdvsjX6xvvb 維尼
"Anytime, Kenny. Now, if you'll excuse me, I have to study for that test tomorrow."8964 copyright protection1115ＰＥＮＡＮＡQUdnK3qMFX 維尼
"I trusted you, and you lied to me."8964 copyright protection1115ＰＥＮＡＮＡGqmDe3O3ZO 維尼
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