我花了幾天的時間讀完了蜂蜜兔的《我喜歡上沒有心跳的她》。
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接下來分享一下心得。
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先從封面來說吧，我覺得圖真的超酷的，切西亞真的很像beatless 的女主蕾西亞，個人也挺喜歡那張圖的。403Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGy4p23fXUC
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(順帶一提，我超愛 ClariS 的 primalove 這首歌──出自beatless 動畫ED)403Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVnQlWQk0kR
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另外，關於每章的名字，我幾乎都知道是neta哪部作品，感覺很有創意。403Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYqoVBCKjjo
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接著，是關於故事內容的個人意見。如果有我看漏或是說錯的、或者您不這麼認為的還請見諒。403Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKYLbg0lDgr
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首先是一開始的展開，雖然有點老套，但相信許多人就是愛這味，我還蠻喜歡的。403Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFE0puCaENy
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在角色刻畫上，確實如蜂蜜兔所說，女主切西亞的刻畫太少，打從歌會之後就更有種趕火車的感覺，或許起碼能在後面的約會劇情中，加重刻劃這位重要角色。403Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4KqiAKce8j
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男主方面，是常見的濫好人主人翁。不只收留切西亞，還打從心裡接納她，讓人很有好感。403Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSzFJOv5wo4
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有點遺憾的是，故事中似乎沒有提到他是在何種機緣下去做駭客、或者為什麼擁有高超的實力，也有可能是我漏讀了也不一定。403Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3b3LB927uN
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在主要女角色上，Eris是我蠻喜歡的角色。這裡就不劇透其他讀者她的本名了。十分可惜的是，故事中好像沒說明到為何她取名為Eris，以及唱歌對她來說是有著什麼樣的意義。我想這應該是部分讀者會好奇的地方，或許可以再多加著墨。403Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5HLdYAT5MA
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至於金毛學妹，確實在她的性癖上有許多刻劃，我覺得蠻特別的。而男主的死黨，那個消波塊和海景前排我每看一次就笑一次，那邊的對話很有趣。403Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡO7YKvMDm1V
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個人最喜歡的段落是天才王子，咳咳，我是說歌會的段落，我覺得在歌詞中間，插入回憶段和獨白，給人的感覺很棒，而且也十分有節奏感。不知不覺間會感動起來。403Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsV53cbc47T
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至於在結尾部分則顯得稍微平淡，或許可以再用多一點點的篇幅，描述和刻劃兩人最終的那一幕。403Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡW4L4H5RZyX
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總結來說，我很喜歡這個故事。403Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSxg5wBPSVn
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各位有興趣的話，歡迎參考看看。403Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡij5w96ucgk
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