讀完了VIA所撰寫的《斷劍之王與預歌聖女》。906Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyTVHUAdrm7
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這邊簡單講一下感想。906Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIJHnvNaYjs
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本作行文流暢，能很輕鬆的閱讀，整體的節奏感比起蒼劍開場所呈現出的緊湊風格，我更喜歡這樣的步調。
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一切都十分自然、合理，且饒富趣味。角色方面，也都演出得十分可愛。906Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡU04C2qrZeb
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劇情而言，本作埋藏不少伏筆，而且這樣的轉折都不禁讓人眼睛為之一亮。我個人非常喜歡。906Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5cSfPGdvji
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要說有所遺憾的話，個人認為斷劍場面，男主角演說是勾起熱血的橋段，但感覺這樣的情緒到下一章，輪到女主表達自己想法時，有點被斷掉。906Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8u13SxExeC
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或許可以男女主兩邊的演說交換一下順序，男主先受到質疑，眾人用異樣眼光看他，男主正要開口，女主卻先表達自己的想法（有可能依然受到質疑），最後再換男主宣達自己的想法，洗清眾人的疑惑，並且讓這一幕在熱血中結束。906Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhEssxUqDq4
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我個人是比較偏好這樣的安排，當然也尊重作者的想法。906Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQY1nbuAqkt
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另外，在三人的帳篷橋段，我自已的話是比較喜歡再塞點福利，不過這是我個人的願望就是了ＸＤ906Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpLDF2czr4R
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至於戰爭場面，本作有逐步炒熱氣氛，並帶出轉折，我蠻喜歡的。906Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbPHNVcYcRD
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以結尾來說，女主有種沒有發揮作用的感覺，或者是說戲份有點少，雖然知道她中間有發揮自己的能力，但或許可以再強化女僕跟女主之間的不同。906Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6BXaFl0rTZ
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一位按照指示承受不安卻依然打算靜靜等待男主回來，一位卻是感知到危險想要去救他，兩者之間的理念衝突。但最後因為女主的堅持，所以兩人做出行動，進而讓男主得救之類的。算是再增加一點他們的戲份和補足他們心中的想法吧。906Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡG2xRo2jx1n
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而原本我是想說女主會再用另一種方式，發展出新的能力，並對預歌的意義有新的詮釋，不過從終章顯示出的主旨來說，算是有解釋不走這樣劇情的原因，也能理解作者的設計，算是能夠接受的。906Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuczmBjsZVJ
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總結來說，這是一部相當好看的作品。要是搭配插畫，付梓成書，並告訴我這是已經上市的作品，我也會相信，並且乖乖掏錢。906Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡx7pk2IvyvA
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而放眼整個蕉園，這目前是我最喜歡的一部作品。906Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYCOothyfS8
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希望作者能繼續寫下去。906Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBOmattxlqU
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大概是這樣。906Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwKpftifaFr
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有興趣的朋友，歡迎閱讀看看。906Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtEYa6F6Xw8
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