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No Plagiarism!2ouJM1WhN9NXhbBeAeXfposted on PＥNAＮＡ Chapter 1.03: September 20, 20158964 copyright protection1115ＰＥＮＡＮＡPBaHDNWwAs 維尼
"I've finished reading your manuscript."8964 copyright protection1115ＰＥＮＡＮＡGHk2V1srTL 維尼
"Really? Weren't you going to study for your geophysics test tomorrow?"8964 copyright protection1115ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9xhhJ8b3w6 維尼
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"Don't you want to hear what I think of your story?"8964 copyright protection1115ＰＥＮＡＮＡGjvmr21NxA 維尼
"By all means."8964 copyright protection1115ＰＥＮＡＮＡiabSICup8x 維尼
"I agree with Susy. The writing style is too lighthearted for the actual story. You should darken the tone."8964 copyright protection1115ＰＥＮＡＮＡRWOEk6l1pb 維尼
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"Also—I think her assassin friend's character is a tad underdeveloped. He has so much potential as a character."8964 copyright protection1115ＰＥＮＡＮＡUsvuUmT0eL 維尼
"I'll look into that. Thanks, Eru."8964 copyright protection1115ＰＥＮＡＮＡK2jJt8KHQz 維尼
"Anytime, Kenny. Now, if you'll excuse me, I have to study for that test tomorrow."8964 copyright protection1115ＰＥＮＡＮＡrM8EoYPgyW 維尼
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