The First Mage

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Blankmarks

I'm a traveler of stories and I want to improve my craft so I can do justice to anything I write. Would appreciate constructive criticism and maybe a friend or two.

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The First Mage

fantasy magic mystery shortstory suspense tragedy magicalpowers philosophy magical philosophical

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I wrote this story for another publication and it didn't get accepted so here it is on here. What can I do to improve, is this really bad or just okay?

The story details the journey of boy who seeks to the power of magic, a skill lost to myth and forgotten by most. He's on an expedition to one of the last places of the old magical world, the Aion Temple.

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