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No Plagiarism!R175zKFfQ0q1E33fPFhxposted on PＥNAＮＡ Chapter 1.03: September 20, 20158964 copyright protection1116ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9ka9MXEgxt 維尼
"I've finished reading your manuscript."8964 copyright protection1116ＰＥＮＡＮＡswcYJBxU2k 維尼
"Really? Weren't you going to study for your geophysics test tomorrow?"8964 copyright protection1116ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9uCokOuulh 維尼
"I'll be fine."8964 copyright protection1116ＰＥＮＡＮＡE9iFNTvTq1 維尼
"If you say so."8964 copyright protection1116ＰＥＮＡＮＡhkh8eASVVL 維尼
"Don't you want to hear what I think of your story?"8964 copyright protection1116ＰＥＮＡＮＡoUfKysSwhL 維尼
"By all means."8964 copyright protection1116ＰＥＮＡＮＡYFmENU5ghi 維尼
"I agree with Susy. The writing style is too lighthearted for the actual story. You should darken the tone."8964 copyright protection1116ＰＥＮＡＮＡoBT5HX6koR 維尼
"I'll do my best."8964 copyright protection1116ＰＥＮＡＮＡi9K440r3Kh 維尼
"Also—I think her assassin friend's character is a tad underdeveloped. He has so much potential as a character."8964 copyright protection1116ＰＥＮＡＮＡev8qbbKEGS 維尼
"I'll look into that. Thanks, Eru."8964 copyright protection1116ＰＥＮＡＮＡqyTDVjnwHn 維尼
"Anytime, Kenny. Now, if you'll excuse me, I have to study for that test tomorrow."8964 copyright protection1116ＰＥＮＡＮＡXIrDUhDHun 維尼
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