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Ballistic Writing
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Contest Holder River*
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  • G: General Audiences
  • PG: Parental Guidance Suggested
  • PG-13: Parents Strongly Cautioned
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Diplomat Love Issue

Ihsan_author
Jul 20, 2017
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River - I really like the story. Great job! 
I had say you just needed to edit, as I felt a few lines were confusing and be careful while going between the past and present tense. 
Other than that, it's an amazing story! 
3 years ago
Ihsan_author - Ahhh... At last there is a comment for me! Thank you very much and i'm glad to hear your appreciation. I'm started felt lonely lately because no one replied me. 

I will try to edit it and learn the grammar more ^^. Once again thank you River
3 years ago
River - @Iskandar, That's totally fine. You are actually the fastest person to reply^^
3 years ago
Ihsan_author - @River,because there is nothing i do right now except this :D
3 years ago
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