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Fantasy
The Knowledge Seeker
Writer Imascribble
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  • G: General Audiences
  • PG: Parental Guidance Suggested
  • PG-13: Parents Strongly Cautioned
  • R: Restricted
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#3

Chapter 3 - The Party

Imascribble
Aug 16, 2017
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Lunassandra Hughes - 'Anna believing' is missing an 'is' toward the beginning of the issue, but that's the only error I caught. I've really enjoyed your story thus far. The only thing that gets me is how centered on the small group of characters the story is, no outside conflict being brought in. It cuts them off from the world a bit and I wish I had a greater view on the world in general. Do others have similar curses? Do others have greater/worse gifts? That sort of thing. But I've enjoyed it this far and will read more should you continue. :)
3 years ago
Imascribble - Thanks again for catching the error! Funny you should mention it, but I actually intentionally want it to be a few isolated individuals in an isolated point in time and space. I can tell you, however, that people born with these "gifts" are extraordinarily rare. Graham has never touched anyone with any other kind of abilities.
3 years ago
IcePrincess - This is getting really good!! :)
3 years ago
Imascribble - Thank you! Glad you're enjoying it! :)
3 years ago
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