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Purisity'sLove - I am not feeling that sense of urgency. I am not feeling the fear from those who were captured. I need that reality. I need what you'd actually sense and feel from someone who has just been abducted, where is it?
5 years ago
shnuffeluv - This is my first time attempting to write a proper suspense. It takes time and effort, but I believe that I'm learning. It should get better from here!
5 years ago
Purisity'sLove - @shnuffeluv, I am sure that it will be. I am the same way when it comes to science fiction. I am not good in certain genres and so I rely on the comments of those writers who are. I love your plot. 
5 years ago
shnuffeluv - Thank you for the feedback. I certainly will put it to good use!
5 years ago
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