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Purisity'sLove - I don't like the sudden change of heart from Sylvia. It seems too sudden. I can't see her apologizing directly...maybe indirectly but not so forward so fast. 
3 years agoreply

shnuffeluv - It's supposed to seem a bit forced and fake. She's trying to force herself to be liked so that she can live a while longer. It's not a bad plan, but it's a terrible execution.
3 years agoreply

Purisity'sLove - @shnuffeluv, OHHHH...alright I understand. She's faking it. I get it now. 
3 years agoreply

Nor - A bit gross, a bit sick... Like it! Its interesting how you added in toilets - I hate how many books omit stuff like that.
3 years agoreply

shnuffeluv - Thank you, I thought it would be unrealistic for everyone to hold their pee for like, 10 hours.
3 years agoreply

Nor - every time I read a book where the characters aren't in a good position to deal with it the author just leaves it out - take the secret island for example, the characters hold it in for a couple of weeks on a secluded island. It makes no sense!
3 years agoreply

shnuffeluv - @Nor, And it's actually physically impossible to hold it that long. My record is about 3 days...not on purpose, I just kept forgetting and I was really, /really/ dehydrated.
3 years agoreply

Nor - @shnuffeluv, to be honest I really didn't need to know that. Although I am impressed. My records only a day and a half and that was pushing it... I have suddenly realised just how odd this conversation is... 
3 years agoreply

shnuffeluv - @Nor, hahaha...sorry, I don't really have an 'off' button...
3 years agoreply

Nor - @shnuffeluv, trust me, neither do I. I'm pretty much famous with my friends for being wierd and not knowing when to stop... Join the club, fellow wierdo!
3 years agoreply

shnuffeluv - @Nor, Thanks, I will~! XD
3 years agoreply

ElizabethBecker - I love it
3 years agoreply

shnuffeluv - Thank you~~~
3 years agoreply

ElizabethBecker - Welcome
3 years agoreply

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