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I'll Kill You
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Purisity'sLove - They are all cowards, I do admit. But...Sylvia will not die. She just seems too important. She makes the story. She makes things interesting. I vote... "_____"
3 years agoreply

shnuffeluv - Sylvia's definitely going to be around a little while longer, yeah.
3 years agoreply

Nor - It's really good! Please publish the next issue soon as I might burst!
3 years agoreply

shnuffeluv - I'm working on it! I've gotta decide who to kill off.
3 years agoreply

Nor - @shnuffeluv, I'd do either beck, G or Tris as they are less likely to become interesting characters.
3 years agoreply

shnuffeluv - I'll keep that in mind!
3 years agoreply

Master Of Fandoms - The whole 9 people plus killer made me think of a video game series though major plot differences both are playing a game with death. Can't wait to read more
3 years agoreply

shnuffeluv - Thanks!
3 years agoreply

I-Dont-Like-I-Obsess - This story has a lot of intrigue! I'm really looking forwards to what happens next. The characterization of the characters is on point, considering what people would be thinking during a situation like this. I think to add to the suspense, thrown in sensory details along with the 'texting' (dialogue) so that the reader can really feel where Sylvia is and what she's experiencing. :)
3 years agoreply

shnuffeluv - I'll keep that in mind! It's hard to balance the dialogue against description, and I'll try to include more of it. Thank you for your advice!
3 years agoreply

I-Dont-Like-I-Obsess - @shnuffeluv, No problem! I believe this'll turn out very well in the end!
3 years agoreply

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