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Chapter 6- Secret
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Arghh!!!´ His body kept sucking in the fire energy. Even though his core has beed sicking in the energy for a while now it wasnt even close to full, entering his core the fire energy felt like it was being sucked into an endless abyss.82Please respect copyright.PENANAAXcvVm6nJ5
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After a while his core began to tremble, ´What monstrous core is this!?!´ Sirus though as the core continued to tremble. After trembling for a while the suction power of his core, became weaker and weaker and after some time it completely stopped sucking all of the fire energy of the world. When the suction stopped, the core kept on trembling causing great pain to Sirus´ body, no longer able to fight off the pain Sirus fainted.82Please respect copyright.PENANADNxnzkMPbU
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´Huh?´ Sirus has finally awoken. ´What happened?´ He asked himself as he began to look around his room. The room looked intact and not a single thing looked out of place. He began to inspect his core and was astonished to noticed his core wasnt like anything he ever read before,¨What the hell!?!¨ He asked himself outloud. There was a slight silence in the room, and Sirus noticed something. He spoke. ¨What the hell!!!?¨ He said once again as he began to look at his hands. He finally had hands!. He finally had a human form.82Please respect copyright.PENANAIRUBtod2Pd
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Quickly moving towards the window Sirus began to look at his reflection. His room was fairly small, but big enough to support his human body. There were no mirrors in his room so the only way to look at himself was through a small circle window behind his bed. His human body was average height, but that was the only average thing he had. His skin was white and tender, like a female´s, it even looked delicate. He possessed illuminating white hair that reached his shoulders, even though his hair was white there was a somewhat golden glow to it. The golden glow that looked like came from his hair matched his golden pupils. He looked like a god, he looked like someone who belonged in a higher realm. His looks were just too perfect. ¨Are you serious?...¨ Sirus thought to himself. Now not only his core and power but his looks would bring him endless trouble.82Please respect copyright.PENANAyVsQ8RWAxF
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¨Who is there!!¨ Sirus heard Greta scream as her voice got louder as she approached his room.82Please respect copyright.PENANAjSxkgoUZ1k
¨Shit!¨ Sirus said as his face turned dark. Sirus quickly moved to his bed and began to cover himself with the blankets that covered it, he was naked after all. Even though, the beasts aren't born humans, they already kept beds for when the the beasts are able to transform. Every beast had potential to at least reach the Core Apprentice Stage, and when they reach that stage they could always get a humanoid appearance, of course not every one of them look human. Some have horns, scales, long ears and even wings.82Please respect copyright.PENANATAgmqpdnZL
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¨Who are you!?! And where is the young bird that was here?!¨ Asked Greta as she entered the room. She was holding a knife on her left hand as she took an offensive stance. Greta was sweating, she was worried to death. These young birds to her were like her own child, if anything happened to them she would never forgive herself.82Please respect copyright.PENANA0htxBKVwKX
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¨Greta! You know me! I´m the white Red Winged Bird, that you have been taking care of, I have just reached Core Apprentice Stage.¨ Said Sirus hoping Greta would just let the fact that a young beast have just reached a new stage in cultivation.82Please respect copyright.PENANAZnq0W9Su5Q
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¨Impossible!!¨ She said as she began to inspect the young boy standing in front of her. Now that she took a better look at him she realised that there were some resemblances between this young man and the white bird she was taking care of, but this level of growth was just too, monstrous.82Please respect copyright.PENANAw7I3fI1MWm
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¨It's true… I am called Sirus, it's a pleasure to finally be able to talk to you...¨ Sirus said slowly hoping Greta wouldn't freak out on him.82Please respect copyright.PENANAFg4NQIwahM
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¨But, how is that even possible!?!, It would take at least 4 years for a Red Wing Bird to understand how to cultivate, and who knows how long it would take for them to reach the Core Apprentice Stage!¨ She said as she kept an eye on Sirus. She was flabbergasted.´Is this even possible´ She kept asking herself over and over.82Please respect copyright.PENANAggA0ZwGSlQ
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¨Please, calm down and let me explain… Ok?¨ Asked Sirus while nodding, as he raised both of his hands in defence. After saying this Sirus was able to notice Greta loosened her grip on the knife, but remained in a stance.82Please respect copyright.PENANA7nJ2lCc2w9
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She nodded. What could she do? Her core was damaged, preventing her from cultivating ever again, and this Sirus boy was at the Core Apprentice Stage, she really couldn't do anything.82Please respect copyright.PENANAk88s4WqHgy
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¨Now… Like I have said before, my name is Sirus. As I have told you I am at the Core Apprentice Stage, and indeed I was able to achieve this in 2 years. Based on this feat you can tell that I am no normal Red wing Bird, if I am one at all. But I would like to ask you to keep this a secret from everyone, until the others have at least reached this stage or close. I wouldn't want to Bring troubles to the family.¨ Sirus said slowly as he stared at Greta hoping for an understanding.82Please respect copyright.PENANAM0ibh5B4zT
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Silence filled the room as both looked at each other.82Please respect copyright.PENANAlqWhNmzMZT
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¨Prove it. Prove to me you are the white bird that was once here.¨ Greta asked.82Please respect copyright.PENANArrasMwy3jm
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Trying to turn back into beast form, Sirus began to concentrate on his body. A golden aura began to cover every part of his body as his body began to change. 82Please respect copyright.PENANAoFDjfAvV8L
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He was transformed. He was a bird again, but this time the bird was bigger. His new bird form had small changes, other than being twice the size there was before, one could see that instead of being all white, his feathers had golden shafts and rachis(The middle line thing that goes through the middle of a feather.).82Please respect copyright.PENANAeISs4VrWwu
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¨Monster...¨ Murmured Greta in disbelief. Reaching the Core apprentice stage at such an age was almost criminal. How could the gods award such a id with monstrous growth? His futures are limitless. Greta was unable to believe what was going on, even though she felt scared, she also felt very relieved that the little white bird that she has been taking care of all these years is not only alive but powerful. ¨But wouldn't it be too difficult to keep this a secret?¨ Asked Greta.82Please respect copyright.PENANAgiDCSBe25M
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Thinking for a bit, Sirus responded,¨Not at all, as long as you don't tell anyone it will be fine. I don't go out much anyways, so right now lets just keep this between us.¨ 82Please respect copyright.PENANAHDaPAo8iXu
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Hearing his response Greta nodded.82Please respect copyright.PENANAR3UmhGWrUs
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¨By the way, can I get some clothes for my humanoid form?¨ Asked Sirus as he still covered himself in the blanket.82Please respect copyright.PENANA4fQQ9GvELd
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Finally realizing that he didn't have any cloth to cover himself when he was in his humanoid form  Greta responded,¨Y- Yeah… Wait here...¨ She said as she left.82Please respect copyright.PENANAp7lvpNb5na
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´Surely, experts felt the vacuum from my core, and they might even send people here to look for it´s source… They don't know where exactly in this city was the source of the vacuum so when they reach this city they will no longer have any leads… From the closest city it would take a month to get here, and over 2 years for other cities near us… I will have more than enough time to cultivate.¨ Thought Sirus as he began to estimate the arrival of the experts that felt his core. Even though his estimation of location and time were somewhat correct, there was one flaw. The experts would arrive sooner than he thought.82Please respect copyright.PENANA2sFjBFRrBR
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