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香港人作者及讀者社區
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糖糖
糖糖 ⋅ 7 years ago
這是小思寫的故事的第一章，而主要是描寫人的，所以想請前輩們給我這新手一些意見，請盡量批評！
penana.com/story/8828/%E5%B8%83%E4%BD%A9%E8%92%82%E5%8D%A1%E5%82%B3/issue/4
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聖賢
聖賢 ⋅ 7 years ago
有在看的喔
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