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歡迎來看我的作品
#1
老闆娘
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6 years ago
目前我正在寫異能者的世界,需要各位朋友們的建議~~
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嚮往國度
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6 years ago
@老闆娘,
看了1~11
建議1
先深入了解你創造的這些角色,看你要賦予這些角色什麼工作,當然包括主角。
建議2
故事題材有了
就是看不到主旨,這是最大硬傷。
什麼是主旨?等我回去用電腦再說明
建議3
架空的故事背景空白了些。
背景指的不只是角色處的環境
包括其它人物的社經地位環境
以及人文環境風俗等
缺少這些,因此故事也看起來白了一點。
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#2
煦焱
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6 years ago
我也正在寫類似的,能給點建議嗎?
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老闆娘
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6 years ago
恩~能力不要太誇張,劇情能連接的上那應該就沒問題了
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煦焱
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6 years ago
@老闆娘, 謝啦,會努力不棄坑
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#3
霓詩
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6 years ago
我比較擅長恐怖....
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老闆娘
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6 years ago
ww
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#4
嚮往國度
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6 years ago
可是老闆娘的劇情沒連接內……
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瀧介
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6 years ago
@嚮往國度, 那我有連接嗎?😆😆😆
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老闆娘
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6 years ago
調整中...
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嚮往國度
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6 years ago
@瀧介, 哪一部0.0 你有兩部呢
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瀧介
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6 years ago
@嚮往國度, 嗯………其實我不知道你說哪一部😆😆,因為我有幾部是續作😆😆
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嚮往國度
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6 years ago
@瀧介, 阿阿,不是,因為你問我有沒有連接。但我還沒開始看。所以我也不知道你問得是哪部XD
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瀧介
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6 years ago
@嚮往國度, 喔喔~我通常不會找人來看我的作品😄😄
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嚮往國度
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6 years ago
@老闆娘,
主旨的意思是
有沒有聽過「小氣財神」這部小說?外國人寫的。
這是寫一個有錢人,卻是個非常小氣八拉的大人,他的人生對什麼都很抱怨不喜歡,愛生氣。
很小氣的有錢人,這是題材。
這個故事過程,漸漸讓主角認識到,原來死守著錢財,人生就是無趣的。
但當他不再小氣、學會愛別人幫助別人時,為別人付出時,他自己變得康慨大方,人生也快樂起來。
這個故事主旨就是表達,付出與康慨待人,自己才能快樂起來,否則有再多的錢也沒用。
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