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寫作的節奏掌握
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穆夙芽
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5 years ago
常常在寫作的時候劇情會有一點拖,或是跳太快,想知道大家都是如何去安排劇情的,會事先都訂好再寫嗎?
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艾瑞卡(Erica)
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5 years ago
@穆夙芽, 這是一種自我的節奏,別人沒辦法教的,必須自己去體會!(≧▽≦)
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穆夙芽
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5 years ago
@王董(Erica), 其實我都是非常順感覺的,只是太放飛了,有的時候拉不回來,所以.....(汗
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艾瑞卡(Erica)
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5 years ago
@穆夙芽, 讓它飛吧!╮(╯▽╰)╭
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穆夙芽
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5 years ago
@王董(Erica), 飛了(淡定看)就像斷了線的風箏,回不來了(你夠了喔)🤣
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#2
玼瑕
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5 years ago
按計劃按步就班來寫太無趣了(X
連自己都不確定會發生什麼事不覺得這種刺激焦慮悔恨才有真實感嗎(X
作者這種生物本來就是M啊還不趕快挖坑給自己跳不然咧(X
反正事後怎麼修稿修不完,所以當下先放飛自我免得修稿時沒得飛(X
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穆夙芽
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5 years ago
@玼瑕, 怎麼辦,我現在就是這個狀態啊喵(掩面🤣
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玼瑕
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5 years ago
怎麼辦喔?
【內心小劇場示意圖】妳就挖個坑,一面哭喊著"誰來把我給埋了啊啊啊"一面悲憤交加風雷火電地跳進去然後進行各種掙扎扭曲抽搐翻滾的蠕動....
冷靜下來後就爬出坑繼續寫文這樣<(▔﹏▔)y=~
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穆夙芽
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5 years ago
@玼瑕, 咦?!原來你也是把自己活埋再爬出來的案例啊!太好了,太好了,來擊掌!◝(╹▿╹)◜
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玼瑕
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5 years ago
ヽ(*▔∀▔)人(╹▿╹*)ノ
我們可以命名為薛西弗斯的滾坑(不!
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穆夙芽
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5 years ago
@玼瑕, ヽ(*▔∀▔)人(╹▿╹*)ノ
耶,好呀~~~不過薛西弗斯是什麼呀?
(╹▿╹)?!
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玼瑕
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5 years ago
https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/薛西弗斯
簡單來說就是賽河原物語的西方成人版,日復一日地重覆相同的苦罰然後滾回原點無限重覆
換算(?)成寫作的情境就是,爬出坑後還是會再撲回坑裡哀號扭滾一番xN,這就是宿命!(X
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穆夙芽
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5 years ago
@玼瑕, 原來如此,我明白了~
這就是宿命,所以,一起撲坑吧~撲坑吧...撲坑吧...(絕望回音特效)◝(╹▿╹)◜
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玼瑕
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5 years ago
哼哼,其實除了自埋之外我還可以把臉埋進貓主子的軟毛小肚肚上磨蹭吸吸然後被巴貓掌!
但這是高鏟屎官才能擁有的特權所以說來向妳炫耀一下!
啊不我的意思是說,創作的先決要件是培養感性與品味,所以暴走不是問題,問題是暴走完後要能夠忍痛自裁(?),自裁是為了更長遠的暴走,共勉之(?
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穆夙芽
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5 years ago
@玼瑕, 可惡啊!!!居然可以將臉埋進貓主子的肚肚,我家的主子都...啊不對,我連主子都沒有,嗷嗚嗚嗚....
嗯嗯!!(((連連點頭)))所以,咱們一起來自裁,一起來暴走吧!喔!!!(((莫名變得好熱血
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#3
嚮往國度
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5 years ago
你就想像一個波浪拋物線吧
把它當作劇情快慢去寫-...-
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穆夙芽
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5 years ago
@嚮往國度, 這個想法蠻具體的,謝謝你,我來試試看👍
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#4
阿雀
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5 years ago
當成電影去寫
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穆夙芽
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5 years ago
@季候鳥, 這個想法不錯,我會試試看的,謝謝你👍
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#5
朱諾(Juno)
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5 years ago
自由放飛(大誤
我大概一開始不會去想,寫著寫著感覺有方向了才會打大綱
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穆夙芽
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5 years ago
@朱諾(Juno), 我也是採放飛路線ヾ(๑╹◡╹)ノ但是我的寫作魂已經放飛太遠,迷路了...決定以後寫到有感覺(快飛走了)就趕緊打大綱了٩(๑❛ᴗ❛)۶ 謝謝呦~
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#6
Alex(阿歷)
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5 years ago
通常盡量在後面可以搞點事,然後下回再處理。不過節奏每個人都不同,我認識有些人會每回都寫得像完結,類似單元劇
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穆夙芽
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5 years ago
@Alex(阿歷), 後面搞點事,下回再處理,有點類似鋪梗囉?
單元劇那個我還沒試過,之後來開一篇試試看好了。ヾ(๑╹◡╹)ノ
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#7
牧黥
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5 years ago
建議設個靈感箱,想到什麼好想法可以寫在上面,最好分門別類,然後初步可以設個雛形架構,之後可以依序填補上去。
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妖怪P
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5 years ago
沒錯~其實也不一定好想法才寫,想到什麼就留下來,就算是覺得不好的段落也別急著刪除,先留著,也許之後還有辦法回收利用,每個想法都是很重要的
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穆夙芽
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5 years ago
@牧黥, 喔喔!這個方法對我來說還蠻不錯的,謝謝你欸~
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穆夙芽
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5 years ago
@妖怪普利耶露, 了解了,就是把刪掉的另外存放囉~ヾ(๑╹◡╹)ノ?謝謝你~
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#8
Mochi糬
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5 years ago
我的話會先架構大綱
譬如我現在在寫的這篇小說
前傳的目的是刻畫主角的過去跟性格
然後在開始想要怎麼鋪程節奏要慢還是快
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楓葉
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5 years ago
@Mochi糬, 發現野生的史來姆(盯
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Mochi糬
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5 years ago
@楓葉, 發現野生楓葉小弟(#
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穆夙芽
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5 years ago
原來如此,謝謝你,我會試試看的!!!
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#9
橘子樂園
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5 years ago
我寫法很隨意,有一個故事大綱,寫著寫著有新念頭就加進去www
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穆夙芽
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5 years ago
@橘子樂園, 我有時候也會這樣呢,然後就不知不覺變成超長的作品了(扶額
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橘子樂園
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5 years ago
@穆夙芽, +1!!!!!(望向山丘之歌,嘆息)有時候覺得「加點東西會更好吧?」然後腦洞放飛便不能回頭了⋯⋯
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穆夙芽
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5 years ago
@橘子樂園, 然後可能前面鋪的梗就要改了喵(遠目
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橘子樂園
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5 years ago
@穆夙芽, 唔⋯⋯我盡量是「加了也沒什麼關係」的設定,可能要字眼上的修整吧
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穆夙芽
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5 years ago
@橘子樂園, 原來如此,「加了也沒關係」的設定就跟你說的那樣只有架構囉?
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橘子樂園
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5 years ago
@穆夙芽, 差不多吧,總之故事走向沒彎就行
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穆夙芽
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5 years ago
@橘子樂園, 好呦~謝謝你~那麼我就來放飛自我了(X)🤣
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橘子樂園
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5 years ago
@穆夙芽, 一起吧!(你滾
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穆夙芽
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5 years ago
@橘子樂園, 一起一起~ヾ(๑╹◡╹)ノ~手牽手,我們一起走~(X
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橘子樂園
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5 years ago
@穆夙芽, 耶~~~,,,>w<,,,
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穆夙芽
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5 years ago
@橘子樂園, ( ˘͈ ᵕ ˘͈♡)
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#10
釉瑤
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5 years ago
我是…靠直覺,不然就把自己想像成讀者,然後自己看自己的文,如果覺得自己如果是讀者看了覺得很拖戲就加快腳步
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穆夙芽
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5 years ago
@釉瑤, 這個想法很好,我還沒這樣去想過,謝謝妳,一起加油~ヾ(๑╹◡╹)ノ
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