@Bee, I would be thankful if you read my story called Last Gods here on Penana.

I plan to make this story into a Visual Novel one day.

I would love if you could answer these questions afterwards.

1. Favorite and worst Character?
2. Favorite and worst Scene?
3. Plot holes?
4. Overall enjoyment or lack thereof?
5. Predictions for  future issues?

Thanks for replying.