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安安,我是新手書書,現在正寫《那曾經,錯過了什麼》
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書月
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7 years ago
我有個問題......詩作是重詞彙還是情感?我一直被人直戳感情表達不佳,重於詞彙。
但這就是我的詩風呀!希望能藉由小說練情感!務必多多給建議哦!
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朱諾(Juno)
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7 years ago
@書月, Hmm我是覺得兩種都不錯
當然,能夠兼具是更好啦!
就我個人而言,我是詞藻派的。因為年齡問題,寫不出有內涵的東西,只好先練文筆啦!←不過我文筆也不怎麼好就是了
Btw你的小說超好看~
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書月
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7 years ago
@朱諾(Juno), 詞藻派握手!你說到重點了!我覺得我也是人生歷練不夠以至於內容內涵不夠!或許該計畫些旅行拓展視野
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星歿
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7 years ago
@書月, 我覺得情感比較重要。其實寫得好的小說只要簡單的文詞,不需要什麼華麗的詞藻就能表現出豐厚的情感。不是說文筆好壞,我認為能否真正展現出那些內涵才是重點!
雖然咱是詞藻派的啦( ;ω;)四個月前的形容詞過盛到想賞自己幾個耳光......(多到文義不暢做什麼qq##
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書月
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7 years ago
@星歿, 謝謝你的建議>v<
我的詩作駢儷,但小說應該比較有感情啦!
我也會多加磨練的!
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星歿
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7 years ago
@書月,詩詞嗎?!!!那很厲害欸XDDD我這方面完全不行😂
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書月
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7 years ago
@星歿, 我的散文就不太行啦Q^Q沒感情......
→寫景派、駢儷詩
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賽門貓
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7 years ago
兩個都有呀,等等書大大你是不是詞藻過於華麗XDD貓我就常這樣,容易忽略內容上的情感一事,只追求完美的形容詞,以至於文章的顯眼處只在於表面QQ
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書月
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7 years ago
@賽門貓, 哇喔!找到同類!(感動)
你也有寫詩囉?我們有同樣的問題或許可以放上作品互相琢磨
我也喜看耽美文,將去看你的作品
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斟墨客 。 迷
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7 years ago
如果是詩詞的畫話,我覺得是「意境」再來情感最後詞彙。
我之所以會把意境擺第一是因為我覺得懸念很重要,會讓人一直想其中的內容,慢慢引領讀者進入文章。
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書月
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7 years ago
@迷六點(刪節號是六點……, 我覺得很有道理,這或許就是我的文學社老師所要求的,但我...目前寫不出意境深遠的詩作。
#真心覺得要多些人生歷練!
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